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Winter of Love

I am brittle and abandoned. Like gilt leaves shed by the selfish tree. Discarded. As you wilfully discarded me. I am damp and distraught. Like wind whipping drizzle against cheeks. Cold As you were callous and cold to me I am sombre and grey. Like the sky’s heavy battleship clouds. Threatening As you so grimly threatened me. I am winter white. Like first frost, static and beautiful. Deadly. As you were to me.

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Date: 4/14/2015 11:13:00 AM
I had to read this again to fully absorb the beauty of your lines. Your words are smooth and mental friendly. My innerself jerk to your written expressions and I just cannot stop loving this beautiful page. Definitely a 7
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Kaye Locke
Date: 4/14/2015 11:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Funom, I'm so glad you liked it.