William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Winter Nature

*Image of Winter Forest Animals by GoodFon.

Winter Nature

Bluebirds spirit a crown of white,
Icicles hang on limbs,
Morning star heighten shining bright,
Ice melts on nestled rims.

A beauteous sparkling beaming,
Snow rabbits disappear,
Clearwater river is streaming,
All made so crystal clear.

Bears enter a lighter sleep state,
Chipmunks e'er so oft wakes,
Pine trees made heavy by snow's weight,
Noonday star takes its breaks.

2023 January 08
*1st Place*
12 Lines of Rhyme - Winter Nature Themed
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2023 January 24

*RZ & HMS; 8,6,8,6 x 3 stanzas.

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Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 9:53 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Winter Nature" is a lovely/beautiful nature story/write/picture. I love this one. Have a wonderful day.............. William Kelii Kekaula January 25, 2023 at 10:44 AM I’m truly delighted, Paula, for your supportive words and admiration, thank you so much, Aloha William

Anisha Dutta January 24, 2023 at 9:12 PM EXCELLENT Ice melts on nestled rims… Pine trees made heavy by snow’s weight…. Crystal clear poem associated with Perfect picture of Winter. I admire. Big Congrats to win TOP William Kelii Kekaula January 24, 2023 at 9:37 PM I am very pleased and honored, Anisha, by your wealth of praised-worthy words and highlighted acknowledgments--thank you, Aloha William

Tania Kitchin January 24, 2023 at 6:05 PM William, congratulations on your first place win in the contest, loved the nature imagery in your poem, well done! William Kelii Kekaula January 24, 2023 at 6:31 PM Thanks for the challenge and my placement, Tania, and your thought-filled expressions, Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler January 24, 2023 at 5:41 PM This is beautiful William. I also loved listening to it! Congratulations on your top win! :) William Kelii Kekaula January 24, 2023 at 6:19 PM As always, Linda, I do enjoy your words and your praise, Aloha William

Sotto Poet January 24, 2023 at 3:10 PM William, you have painted some beautiful and evocative pictures of winter while maintaining a very calm and tranquil tone. Congratulations on getting first place in the contest. William Kelii Kekaula January 24, 2023 at 3:44 PM Your words indulge expressively, Lasaad, with heartfelt gratitude for your praise, Aloha William

Darlene De Beaulieu January 9, 2023 at 11:02 AM Hello Hilto, winter does make the scenery look beautiful. I have not seen snow since November. It is still a spring thaw here. All the best for the New Year. /Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu January 10, 2023 at 11:10 AM Hello Hilto, I have been in a Spring thaw since the day after Christmas. It also has been very dull outside for 4 days in a row. I think we are in a Global warming. A Spring thaw does not last this long. Aloha! /Darlene/ William Kelii Kekaula January 9, 2023 at 1:04 PM Thank you, dear Darlene, time is so precious nowadays, and fresh snow dust our two mountain tops and never yon my friend, Aloha William

Deb M January 9, 2023 at 5:59 AM Wonderful descriptive images of winter with a very calm peaceful Hilo…..Love it! Debx William Kelii Kekaula January 9, 2023 at 6:36 AM I appreciate your expressions, Deb, thank you for sharing my friend, Aloha William

Joanna Daniel January 9, 2023 at 2:41 AM A wonderful scene of winter, William:) William Kelii Kekaula January 9, 2023 at 4:53 AM Thanks, Jo, for your kind sharing my friend, Aloha William