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*Image of Winter Forest Animals by GoodFon. Winter Nature Bluebirds spirit a crown of white, Icicles hang on limbs, Morning star heighten shining bright, Ice melts on nestled rims. A beauteous sparkling beaming, Snow rabbits disappear, Clearwater river is streaming, All made so crystal clear. Bears enter a lighter sleep state, Chipmunks e'er so oft wakes, Pine trees made heavy by snow's weight, Noonday star takes its breaks. 2023 January 08 *1st Place* 12 Lines of Rhyme - Winter Nature Themed ~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2023 January 24 *RZ & HMS; 8,6,8,6 x 3 stanzas.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/25/2023 9:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Winter Nature" is a lovely/beautiful nature story/write/picture. I love this one. Have a wonderful day..............

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/25/2023 10:44:00 AM

I’m truly delighted, Paula, for your supportive words and admiration, thank you so much, Aloha William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/24/2023 9:12:00 PM

EXCELLENT Ice melts on nestled rims… Pine trees made heavy by snow’s weight…. Crystal clear poem associated with Perfect picture of Winter. I admire. Big Congrats to win TOP

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/24/2023 9:37:00 PM

I am very pleased and honored, Anisha, by your wealth of praised-worthy words and highlighted acknowledgments--thank you, Aloha William

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/24/2023 6:05:00 PM

William, congratulations on your first place win in the contest, loved the nature imagery in your poem, well done!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/24/2023 6:31:00 PM

Thanks for the challenge and my placement, Tania, and your thought-filled expressions, Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/24/2023 5:41:00 PM

This is beautiful William. I also loved listening to it! Congratulations on your top win! :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/24/2023 6:19:00 PM

As always, Linda, I do enjoy your words and your praise, Aloha William

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/24/2023 3:10:00 PM

William, you have painted some beautiful and evocative pictures of winter while maintaining a very calm and tranquil tone. Congratulations on getting first place in the contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/24/2023 3:44:00 PM

Your words indulge expressively, Lasaad, with heartfelt gratitude for your praise, Aloha William

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/9/2023 11:02:00 AM

Hello Hilto, winter does make the scenery look beautiful. I have not seen snow since November. It is still a spring thaw here. All the best for the New Year. /Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/10/2023 11:10:00 AM

Hello Hilto, I have been in a Spring thaw since the day after Christmas. It also has been very dull outside for 4 days in a row. I think we are in a Global warming. A Spring thaw does not last this long. Aloha! /Darlene/

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/9/2023 1:04:00 PM

Thank you, dear Darlene, time is so precious nowadays, and fresh snow dust our two mountain tops and never yon my friend, Aloha William

Deb M

Date: 1/9/2023 5:59:00 AM

Wonderful descriptive images of winter with a very calm peaceful Hilo…..Love it! Debx

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/9/2023 6:36:00 AM

I appreciate your expressions, Deb, thank you for sharing my friend, Aloha William

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/9/2023 2:41:00 AM

A wonderful scene of winter, William:)

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/9/2023 4:53:00 AM

Thanks, Jo, for your kind sharing my friend, Aloha William