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Winter Morn's Grass

barefoot grass of dawn

outlining winter-brushed climb

as new sprouts open,

I search morn in veiled ascent

...to find sheen from godly light


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8..03..2016
One Tanka Nature Poem Inspired By My Poem
Rick Parise Contest

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2016

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Bl Devnath Date: 8/17/2016 1:25:00 PM Congrats on your win my friend. Beautiful natural scene. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Login to Reply

Probir Gupta Date: 8/8/2016 6:03:00 AM Lovely Tanka ... Congratulations on your win ... Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/6/2016 8:12:00 AM I had no doubt that this was a sure top winner, Nette! Congratulations!! Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/5/2016 3:01:00 PM Beautiful tanka Nette...best wishes Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 8/5/2016 7:17:00 AM Beautifully done Nette, congratulations... Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/5/2016 12:33:00 AM Lovely tanka with an excellent imagery:) Congratulations on your win, Nette:) Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 8/4/2016 10:34:00 PM Lovely imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 8/4/2016 9:34:00 PM Hi Nette, This is lovely. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 8/4/2016 5:57:00 PM Great to see this one on the list nette...one of my favorites. Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 8/4/2016 5:40:00 PM Very lovely tanka, Nette! Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/4/2016 5:25:00 PM congrats on this beautiful gem, Nette. Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/4/2016 4:38:00 PM wonderful tanka lady, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/3/2016 3:35:00 PM The charm and magic of dawn, introduced by lovely imagery, followed by two great ending lines. Full marks to you, Nette! Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 8/3/2016 2:49:00 PM my first thought after reading was light reflecting from soft morning dew as a new day beckons..a picture painted in my mind.. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/3/2016 5:55:00 AM How inspiring and refreshing dear, nette! A seven! Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/2/2016 9:12:00 PM A beautifully done response to his write, fresh and sheen-filled! CayCay Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/2/2016 4:09:00 PM You are always so good in both tanka and haiku..Fantastic Nette...Loved it. Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 8/2/2016 3:04:00 PM You sold me on the first line, nette. I do not know about tankas but I love fresh dew covered grass, the feel and the smell. Login to Reply

Carly Lalion Date: 8/2/2016 2:00:00 PM Magnificent poem! Indeed, a soft voice --- from searching and finding the marvel of dawn's break--- that ends with the Source who creates this miracle every day! Login to Reply

Leon Datu Date: 8/2/2016 1:27:00 PM You have painted magic and I felt visions of the divine through the glimpse of your morning." Finding tints from lightened gods" pins this brilliant tanka! Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 8/2/2016 1:11:00 PM A terrific Tanka nette...Im sure this one will be singing on top Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2016 12:36:00 PM - Lovely poem, Nette - Best of luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply