Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

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Winter Morn's Grass

balmy grass of dawn

outlining winter-brushed climb

as new sprouts open,

I search morn in veiled ascent

...to find sheen from godly light


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8..03..2016
One Tanka Poem 
Rick Parise Contest

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Bl Devnath August 17, 2016 at 1:25 PM Congrats on your win my friend. Beautiful natural scene. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Probir Gupta August 8, 2016 at 6:03 AM Lovely Tanka ... Congratulations on your win ...

Paul Callus August 6, 2016 at 8:12 AM I had no doubt that this was a sure top winner, Nette! Congratulations!! Hugs // paul

Joseph May August 5, 2016 at 3:01 PM Beautiful tanka Nette...best wishes

Charlie Smith August 5, 2016 at 7:17 AM Beautifully done Nette, congratulations...

Joanna Daniel August 5, 2016 at 12:33 AM Lovely tanka with an excellent imagery:) Congratulations on your win, Nette:)

Sandra Haight August 4, 2016 at 10:34 PM Lovely imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y. August 4, 2016 at 9:34 PM Hi Nette, This is lovely. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Tim Smith August 4, 2016 at 5:57 PM Great to see this one on the list nette...one of my favorites.

Laura Leiser August 4, 2016 at 5:40 PM Very lovely tanka, Nette! Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2016 at 5:25 PM congrats on this beautiful gem, Nette.

Beautiful Scars August 4, 2016 at 4:38 PM wonderful tanka lady, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Paul Callus August 3, 2016 at 3:35 PM The charm and magic of dawn, introduced by lovely imagery, followed by two great ending lines. Full marks to you, Nette! Hugs // paul

Frederic Parker August 3, 2016 at 2:49 PM my first thought after reading was light reflecting from soft morning dew as a new day beckons..a picture painted in my mind..

Demetrios Trifiatis August 3, 2016 at 5:55 AM How inspiring and refreshing dear, nette! A seven!

CayCay Godwin August 2, 2016 at 9:12 PM A beautifully done response to his write, fresh and sheen-filled! CayCay

Charmaine Chircop August 2, 2016 at 4:09 PM You are always so good in both tanka and haiku..Fantastic Nette...Loved it.

Daniel Turner August 2, 2016 at 3:04 PM You sold me on the first line, nette. I do not know about tankas but I love fresh dew covered grass, the feel and the smell.

Carly Lalion August 2, 2016 at 2:00 PM Magnificent poem! Indeed, a soft voice --- from searching and finding the marvel of dawn's break--- that ends with the Source who creates this miracle every day!

Leon Datu August 2, 2016 at 1:27 PM You have painted magic and I felt visions of the divine through the glimpse of your morning." Finding tints from lightened gods" pins this brilliant tanka!

Tim Smith August 2, 2016 at 1:11 PM A terrific Tanka nette...Im sure this one will be singing on top

Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2016 at 12:36 PM - Lovely poem, Nette - Best of luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)