Winter Moon

I whisper to the winter moon
in dialects of falling snow
the lyrics of my flurried rune.

I whisper to the winter moon
my wish for spring with blossoms strewn
piano and adagio.

I whisper to the winter moon
in dialects of falling snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Vey lovely, Dale. Congrats on your win.
Cozart Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 7:15 PM
Thanks, Line!
Roper Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dale.. hugs Eve ~`*
Cozart Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Thank you very much, Eve.
Ashley Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 11:50 AM
Breathtaking, scintillating and exquisite Dale. Gorgeous imagery! Warmest wishes ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Thanks, Susan! Best to you as well.
Cresswell Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Delicate as a snowflake is this beautiful poem.
Cozart Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Thanks so much, Patricia!
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 3:41 PM
wow, Dale, this is GORGEOUS. You are So good with imagery here. One of the better triolets I have seen here. FAVE
Cozart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 4:13 PM
Aw, Thanks so much, Andrea!!
Daniel Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Great choice of words in a nice form, Dale, I've never written a triolet for fear of the iambic meter..
Krampe Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 6:14 PM
"in dialects of falling snow" is a wonderful image, Dale - lovely!
Cozart Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 7:26 PM
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks, Agnes!
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 6:33 PM
a very pretty triolet Dale, I am not a fan of this form but with your awesome imagery you write them so well:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 7:01 PM
Thanks, Jan!!
Adams Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 4:32 PM
Amazing! Flows like a song. I was also liking the "dialects of falling snow". Great write!.......pat
Cozart Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 4:34 PM
Thanks, Pat!!
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 1:53 PM
A beautiful poem--joy to read--superb lines like..in dialects of falling snow..!
Cozart Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay!
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 12:38 PM
- Beautiful written, Dale - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Thanks, AL!!
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