Winter Memories

Winter memories that are still so vivid and bright
Those endless days playing with your mates
Snow falling when it should do, kids shouting and screaming
"It's snowing" running out, mum's shouting "Get some warm clothes on"
Scarves, balaclavas and gloves, only your face showing
Sledging in the snow, home made by dad, the lucky ones with bought ones
And the snow was proper snow, snow that came and stayed
Snow so deep you could only see your mate's head's above it.
Snow that made you want to play, sliding down hills falling on your backsides
Soaking your clothes getting your body chilled but still totally thrilled
Digging the snow off your path with dad making snowmen, huge snowmen
Who had carrot noses and coal for eyes and mouths with an old scarf around his neck to keep him warm
No cars on the road the whole street your playground
Having snow ball fights, taking sides and ganging up, wanting to be part of the best gang
Lying in the snow rolling down hills laughing and shivering  
Then the darkness comes, off home to mum, she's fussing taking your wet clothes off droping them on the floor
Towels and pyjamas hung by the roaring fire, being wrapped in the warm towel mum furiously rubbing "you'll catch your death" she's saying
Pyjamas on, drinking warm milk sat on the carpet in front of the fire
Watching TV,  the Flintstones, Beverly Hillbilly's maybe Huckleberry Hound and Yogi Bear.
Then it's bedtime, going up the stairs slowly not wanting to go, mum shouting after you "I'll be up in a minute" 
Kneeling at the side of the bed, saying your prayers, Our Father who art in heaven..... 
"Look after my mum and dad and my sister" then silently to yourself "Please God let the snow still be here tomorrow"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/18/2015 2:19:00 PM
such wonderful memories I especially loved the snowman images I guess we all built a snowman in our childhood - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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David Mcsorley
Date: 1/21/2015 6:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness x David x
Date: 1/17/2015 9:09:00 PM
Congrats on the win withis fine narrative on winter's end
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David Mcsorley
Date: 1/21/2015 6:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words x David x
Date: 1/17/2015 7:27:00 PM
David, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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David Mcsorley
Date: 1/21/2015 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Linda. I've been away for a few weeks and have only just seen this. I'm amazed and honoured to have won , not least to say surprised. Thank you again for the inspiration to continue. David
Date: 12/24/2014 6:51:00 PM
Hello David, this is a heartfelt poem. David, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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