Winter Magic

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Jan.13.2024
Winter Magic Poetry Competition
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin
~ Placed First~

 

"Winter ensures greater bonding than any other season by bringing the family members together to sit around the hearth enjoying the warmth of the fire and sharing pleasantries"~ By Poet


Snowflakes are sliding down through porous air. They look like confetti on a pretty bride in white. Some land down on bare limbs of trees and bushes Rabbits and squirrels into their comfy borrows alight. A thick blanket of snow is spread over hills and dales. Land and trees look as if someone painted them wholly white. Like pretty jewels, suspended rain drops gleam and glitter. Cold blizzards blow and sweep through the whole night. When flakes of snow are thus gently gliding and landing, When I feel the chill in my body and all through my bones, Into the depths of sweet slumber, my mind takes flight, Enjoying the magic of winter and wind’s euphonic tones!

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Date: 1/20/2024 2:52:00 PM
Valsa, your enchanting poem beautifully captures the serene dance of snowflakes. The imagery of confetti on a bride, the white blanket over hills, and the suspended raindrops paints a vivid winter scene. Your words evoke a sense of wonder and tranquility. Thank you for sharing the magic of winter through your poetic lens. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/19/2024 4:07:00 AM
Valsa, your frigid lines of Winter beauty are lovely to read and take one to the magical place that your seasonal imagery paints so well! A wonderful write! Happy Friday xxoo
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Date: 1/19/2024 3:48:00 AM
Magical use of words, diction, imagery etc. You write such beautiful poetry.
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Date: 1/18/2024 11:42:00 AM
Dear Valsa, you wrote a great poem about the beauty and magic of winter, as well as the sense of tranquility and peace it brings. You used descriptive diction to paint a vivid picture of a winter scene. Words such as "porous air," "comfy borrows," "suspended raindrops," and "euphonic tones" evoke a sense of beauty and tranquility. The use of similes, comparing snowflakes to confetti and raindrops to pretty jewels, adds to the imagery. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 1/16/2024 5:04:00 AM
You definitely brought the magic. Gorgeous imagery.
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Date: 1/15/2024 6:05:00 AM
Valsa, a beautiful poem with wonderful winter imagery, congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 1/18/2024 5:05:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Tania for the recognition you gave to my poem. Sorry I couldn't respond earlier as I have been away traveling with my family.
Date: 1/15/2024 4:15:00 AM
This is absolutely magical dear valsa! I love how descriptive it is and how you’ve painted imagery in a way that any readers would feel and see through your words, i love especially the lines “ Like pretty jewels, suspended rain drops gleam and glitter.“ wow! I love that and your rhymes too! You really are an artistic soul! And that is truly evident here in your poem as well! Its definitely a fave for me! For the emotional depth and imagery and flow of rhymes! Bol for the contest sweet valsa
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Date: 1/15/2024 2:01:00 AM
Great imagery and emotions. You captured the essence of winter.
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Date: 1/14/2024 6:27:00 AM
Such a comforting warm poem to battle the cold incursions of winter!
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Date: 1/14/2024 5:32:00 AM
A splendid winter write, Valsa. So descriptive...Best wishes in the contest. Charlie
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Date: 1/13/2024 11:07:00 AM
Your words transport me to a winter wonderland, where snowflakes descend like confetti, adorning the world in a pristine white. The imagery of snow-covered hills and dales, as if painted by an artist's brush, evokes a tranquil beauty. The mention of rabbits and squirrels finding solace in their cozy burrows adds a touch of warmth to the wintry scene. The portrayal of suspended raindrops as pretty jewels reflects the captivating play of light in this snowy spectacle..
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Date: 1/13/2024 9:54:00 AM
Nice imagery of winter magic. GL in contest.
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Date: 1/13/2024 9:47:00 AM
Dear Valsa, what a truly enchanting poem to relish. I love this! Full of vivid, beautiful, wintry imagery. I love your quote too. This is so well written with wonderful flow. You have captured so much here with such poetic, artistic flair that you can so easily visualise the magical scene. Such a joy to read. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings xx
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