Winter Magic

Winter magic endearing
in a world of great wonder
laden plant life snowed under,
a white blanket, enchanting.

Children's face warming glow
of excitement to peek out
wide eyes and smiles with all-out
play in sparkling clean white snow.

Making snowman mid-winter,
snow angels, snow fights raging,
entertaining, engaging,
world with magical winter.

1/11/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kingston Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:55 PM
Of course, a win. The first snow does make everything look so clean and pretty. I loved your word, "enchanting" to describe the "White blanket" Perfect What a sweet, chilly, fun poem. Your last stanza is my favorite.
Miller Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Beautiful Eve, congratulations
Kitchin Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Eve, a sweet winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 2:35 AM
A sparkling poem capturing the wonder of winter. Hugs.
Galyo Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 5:32 AM
Beautiful, very impressive!
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 2:33 AM
- A beautiful poem, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 10:57 PM
This is so beautiful and unique how you’ve written for the prompt! I love so many lines especially the depth of this, and how you’ve painted imagery. “wide eyes and smiles with all-out play in sparkling clean white snow.” Love those lines the most! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light. Best wishes for the contest
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