Winter Magic

Winter magic endearing in a world of great wonder laden plant life snowed under, a white blanket, enchanting. Children's face warming glow of excitement to peek out wide eyes and smiles with all-out play in sparkling clean white snow. Making snowman mid-winter, snow angels, snow fights raging, entertaining, engaging, world with magical winter. 1/11/2024

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 2/22/2024 7:55:00 PM

Of course, a win. The first snow does make everything look so clean and pretty. I loved your word, "enchanting" to describe the "White blanket" Perfect What a sweet, chilly, fun poem. Your last stanza is my favorite.

Terry Miller

Date: 1/23/2024 7:23:00 AM

Beautiful Eve, congratulations

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2024 7:14:00 AM

Eve, a sweet winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2024 2:35:00 AM

A sparkling poem capturing the wonder of winter. Hugs.

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo

Date: 1/11/2024 5:32:00 AM

Beautiful, very impressive!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2024 2:33:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 1/10/2024 10:57:00 PM

This is so beautiful and unique how you’ve written for the prompt! I love so many lines especially the depth of this, and how you’ve painted imagery. “wide eyes and smiles with all-out play in sparkling clean white snow.” Love those lines the most! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light. Best wishes for the contest