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For Tania Kichin's Winter Magic poetry contest

A Dizain is a French poem or stanza of ten lines, employing eight or ten syllables to the line and having a specific rhyming pattern, as ababbccdcd.

My poem has ten syllables per line.

Like snowflakes your words fall silent. But my heart still hears your voice. Angie Weiland-Crosby Among soft glow of velvet Northern Lights. A winter's palette in landscapes of lace, glitters like ice crystals in moonlit nights, sculpted by nature's wonderland of grace. Stars sparkle in stillness of frozen space. Frost kissed twilight covers branches in white, as silent whispers of snowfall take flight. Floating like ballerinas in Swan Lake, weaving a milky quilt on our campsite, whilst we listen to sounds crackling flames make. (Dizain)

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Terry Miller

Date: 1/23/2024 7:18:00 AM

Wonderfully crafted; congratulations

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2024 6:02:00 AM

SO, a beautifully creative poem, love the Northern lights imagery, congratulations on your first place win!

Jude Herrick

Date: 1/12/2024 10:57:00 PM

Alot of new poems you have crafted, I will sit down with, my cup of tea and pour over their fragrance. But on this one, I can clearly see the Frost Queens Royal Cape, twirling gallantly at Swan Lake, Stars crackling overhead like a Lodge's Fireplace...lodged above this camp, a bard pitching the tenANts of Wonderland. Sweet memories of tabernacled Winter/family in its frosty hands."...a man selling ice dreams~ Chicago meets Frozen ...singing...at campfire, guitar accompanying the lay of the land's whisper adornment of gland

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/11/2024 11:06:00 AM

Dear Silent One, your poem is so rich and descriptive, creating a vivid picture of the winter scene. Your use of imagery such as "soft glow of velvet Northern Lights," "landscapes of lace," and "glitters like ice crystals" to paint a picture of the winter landscape. Literary devices such as simile ("like ballerinas in Swan Lake") and personification ("Frost kissed twilight") add depth to the imagery in this great poem.

Karen Jones

Date: 1/10/2024 11:26:00 AM

I admire your skill set! I can’t write in forms very well while you do seem to effortlessly! This is lovely! Good luck in the contest!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/10/2024 11:25:00 AM

A winter's palette in landscapes of lace, glitters like ice crystals in moonlit nights, sculpted by nature's wonderland of grace---simply beautiful. Winter magic!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/10/2024 11:18:00 AM

Beautiful! Love it. God bless you with a win. Much love, sweet friend, Love, Gina

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/10/2024 9:30:00 AM

Silent One, I just love this one! Its simplicity in spirit issues forth as only the beauty of nature can! Splendiferous imagery makes it seem simple Yet I know how difficult it is to achieve ! Happy Wednesday!!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/10/2024 9:14:00 AM

Oh gosh, what an artistic and profound take for the contest, dear Silent One! An enchanting ambience you've created here with your fairytale-like wordsmithery.. It feels like a whimsical winter magic.. So many spellbinding scenes you've painted here with majestic brushstrokes..beautifully descriptive and eloquent in every way.. "A winter's palette in landscapes of lace" Ah, the painter in me wants to take those colours and hue a landscape like that, wowwww.."Floating like ballerinas in Swan Lake

Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/10/2024 9:15:00 AM

I absolutely love the rhymes here, so mellifluous.. This is a FAV really, a mesmerizing dizain.. Wishing you the best for the contest!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/10/2024 8:51:00 AM

Different and musical how you’ve written this magical dizain for the prompt, i love the way youv rhymed and also how it flows with so many brilliant lines. You paint such vivid imagery which touches all the senses of reader in such eloquence. I love especially how you’ve written “ A winter's palette in landscapes of lace, glitters like ice crystals in moonlit nights,“ so wintry and moving how you’ve delivered that in such a dedcriptive manner: i see through your word weaving the landscape of ice

Ink Empress
Date: 1/10/2024 8:52:00 AM

But i think my most fave of all lines should be “ Floating like ballerinas in Swan Lake, weaving a milky quilt on our campsite,” the elegance and delicate touch of the campsite and snow drizzling and dancing is quite a sight to see! I love it! This should score high i guess. Best wishes! Fave it is for me