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Poetry/Rhyme/Winter Magic
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1615-387-10
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, January 10, 2024
For the International Contest, Winter Magic
Sponsor, Tania Kitchin , Judged 01/15/2024

First Place

101 Inspirational Winter Quotes - Calendar

"To appreciate the beauty of a snowflake, 
it is necessary to stand out in the cold."

                                                                                       Aristotle

 

Winter Magic

 

      The winter storm began with a few scattered flakes,
   but soon the snow was falling, swirling and twirling;
      white covered the city, streets, paths, forests and lakes,
   I loved watching the snowflakes dancing and whirling.

      It was wild with trees swaying back and forth in wind,
   beauty was happening beyond my windowpane;
      oh, I was in a winter magic state of mind,
   each perfect small white snowflake like a song refrain.

      When the snow ended I beheld a wonderland,
   I went outside in the crisp air to breathe the cold; 
      all around the landscape was majestic and grand,
   I returned from my snowy walk with feet ice-cold.
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Kauffman Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 9:50 AM
What a wonderful picture of a winter wonderland, Constance! Love the last line! Congratulations! Blessings to you!
La France Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Sam, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Croft Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your wintery poem
La France Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Karen, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings, Constance
Kitchin Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 5:50 AM
Constance congratulations on your first place win with your wonderful winter poem!
La France Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Tania, thank you so much for the contest and my awesome placement and for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 1:56 PM
what a delightful winter poem Constance i guess you have lots of inspiration living in Canada - I like snow ... but only on Christmas cards and in lovely poems like yours!:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 5:23 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the compliment and sweet comment, yes we have tons of snow in Canada ! Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Winter Magic" write/picture. The quote is so true. Good Luck... Going to work in the winter my feet were ice-cold. It would be 10 AM before I could feel my toes. Have Blessed day writing away.......................
La France Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment, know exactly how you and your toes felt, blessings, Constance
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