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Written on January 9, 2024

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On the still, cool twilight, falling, Like softest feathers, gentle snow. in the skies, rising high stars glow. While the moon resists night’s calling. On this frosty thought, my mind stirs, Shy as the moment when death comes. Will winter’s smile bare fear that numbs? Or will love flow free as she purrs?

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Date: 1/23/2024 7:32:00 AM
Excellent, very well done, congratulations.
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Date: 1/18/2024 3:21:00 AM
I like that this poem is both pretty and meaningful. I love your opening line, with all the soft 'L' sounds, and the darkness when the moon resists the pull to emerge, and how the sky stirs a self-awareness of mortality and how it will be.
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Date: 1/15/2024 6:22:00 AM
Gina, a sweet winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/9/2024 5:56:00 PM
Nicely done, enjoyed reading.
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Date: 1/9/2024 3:32:00 PM
a smooth flowing rhyme scheme, Gina. You've beautifully captured a winter night and I love the question at the end....thought provoking. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 1/9/2024 6:33:00 AM
Love the imagery! My vote is for purring love!
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