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Written on January 9, 2024

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Winter Magic

On the still, cool twilight, falling, Like softest feathers, gentle snow. in the skies, rising high stars glow. While the moon resists night’s calling. On this frosty thought, my mind stirs, Shy as the moment when death comes. Will winter’s smile bare fear that numbs? Or will love flow free as she purrs?
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Miller Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 7:32 AM
Excellent, very well done, congratulations.
Swan Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:21 AM
I like that this poem is both pretty and meaningful. I love your opening line, with all the soft 'L' sounds, and the darkness when the moon resists the pull to emerge, and how the sky stirs a self-awareness of mortality and how it will be.
Kitchin Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Gina, a sweet winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 5:56 PM
Nicely done, enjoyed reading.
Jones Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Love the imagery! My vote is for purring love!
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