Winter Leaves With No Smiles

" The change of seasons lessens the pain of a loss, but like stars it touches those we love leaving memories no one can steal."Quote by Poet October Fall submits to December Winter With its grounds elegant powdery dazzling snow. Kissing out tears of November rain to enter Its final arctic breath and pinch of mystic glow. No two snowflakes are alike upon window sill, Or wind rhymes that tumbles love unforgotten times. I search past recollections on curtains lace frill Bring back bright times as grandfather clock silent chimes. Memories of things like falling leaves or snowflakes Evoke a pleasing loving embrace then crumbles On the anniversary of a loss, does wakes Utter helplessness as the numb heart beat stumbles. Winter leaves with no smiles as it makes it its own Taking the world in its embrace leaving its mark. Please to see Spring beauty and birds melodic tone And watch the clouds unfurl across the pressing dark. October Fall submits to December Winter. No two snowflakes are alike upon window sill, Memories of things like falling leaves or snowflakes Winter leaves with no smiles as it makes it its own. 12/11/2020 Rhyme Pattern - 4 stanzas, 4 lines of abab cdcd efef ghgh, last verse repeat a, c, e, g lines, 12 syllables per line
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La France Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:57 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this excellent poem, I like your quote too _Constance
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December 15, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "Memories of things like falling leaves or snowflakes." They are. Enjoy your win with blessings and a hug................
Rose  Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:42 AM
" The change of seasons lessens the pain of a loss, but like stars it touches those we love leaving memories no one can steal." Quote _by Poet Eve, would you mind if I use this quote , to build a poem of my own on, I love it Did you write it ?
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:51 AM
Yes I did write it . It was one of the requirements of the contest.
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:50 AM
Thank you,and Yes you may use it
Rose  Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:41 AM
This is one of your very best Eve, you have untied the knots of simplicity loosened every talented vibe in your body, I will fav this , and send you a hug to warm your day, Thinking and praying for you, always xo
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December 14, 2020 at 7:31 PM
Congratulations on your top win in the contest, Dear friend :) This is a incredibly B E A U T I F U L piece of writing. I enjoyed it so much and am thankful to have read it. God bless you always
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Thank you, Regina, for the encouragement and your blessings they mean a lot. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 4:20 PM
so beautifully penned Eve many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Thank you my friend. Hugs Eve
Evans Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on your win.... wonderful nature poem.
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:10 PM
Thank you! Hugs
May Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 5:04 AM
Beautiful poem on the seasons Eve..best wishes
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Seeker Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 6:25 PM
Beautiful words “ No two snowflakes are alike upon window sill” congrats on your win!
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you! Hugs Eve
Krutsinger Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 5:03 PM
Your imagery is gorgeous; congratulations on your number 1 win, Eve. You deserved it.
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you dear friend in spirit. Hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 2:43 PM
WoW! Even, This is just lovely! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:15 PM
Thank you for the wow! Hugs
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 2:29 PM
This is a beautiful poem Eve. I enjoyed this very much :) Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Thank you so much. Hugs Eve
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December 13, 2020 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations, Eve, on you number 1 placement in the contest for this lovely poem on nature's beauty while Winter slowly approaches!!
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs Eve
Callus Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 6:40 AM
I can picture you gazing out of the window, Eve, as memories tiptoe in quietly. A beautiful poem, and the rhyme pattern was not as easy as one might think. Hugs // paul
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:27 PM
You made my day. Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 9:05 AM
Beautiful poem. One can feel the cold but feels the poem singing like a tune. ~~
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Thank you my friend. Hugs Eve
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December 11, 2020 at 12:12 AM
That’s beautiful Eve, brings back memories of winters long ago, “With its grounds elegant powdery dazzling snow.” One of your lovely lines in a lovely poem... Belle :-)
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve
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