Winter Leaf Dance

bare  
      branches, 
    sky-outlined 
  one last twirling
          leaf

For Broken Wings L-Form Contest.
Written 4/8/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 3:17 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. These are not so easy to write. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Delaney Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 4:28 AM
Thanks Sara: I appreciate your thoughts. We are going to Florida for a much awaited vacation. My plan is to meditate and write in the quiet times. Stay tuned. SuZ
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Totally delightful ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 18, 2017 at 12:13 AM
A lovely image to perceive SuZ. How are you doing?I think about you often. I hope you are enjoying spring with your garden. Hugs, Connie : ) 7
Callus Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 3:45 PM
You create a lovely yet sad image, Suzanne. Looking forward to see this on the winners' list:) Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 12:43 PM
- Gave me great picture, SuZ :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 6:13 PM
So sadly beautiful.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 4:44 PM
brilliant winter imagery Suzanne!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Delaney Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 6:09 PM
Thanks Jan: I appreciate your stopping by. If I can think of some subjects I may try some more of these. Hugs, SuZ xox
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