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Winter Jewels

The morning sun peeked over the horizon Bringing in the start of yet another new day The snow glistened with sparkling whiteness As the sun's rays picked up shining crystal prisms Sparkling tree branches clung with droplets of snow Looking decorated resembling frozen snow diamonds Twinkling as the sun rays caught the tender flakes The trees all sparkling decorated by mother nature As the sun rose higher and temperature warmed The diamond remnants dissipated all to soon. 11/01/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/14/2014 11:51:00 PM
Such a pretty verse you have here. How are you Phyllis, thank you for reading my chocolate Covered Cherries, I do love them xoxo ;)
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Date: 1/30/2014 10:59:00 PM
This is so beautiful Phyllis, and exactly the vision I remember when I visited relatives in north east Kansas. Trees decked in diamonds! Breathtaking to behold as is your poem! Sorry I haven't been around that much. I am still so busy with my little granddaughter who will be 2 yrs. March 2nd. She inspires me to write, but I don't have the time. LOL I hope you are well. Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/29/2014 3:18:00 AM
My kind of poem . I loved it.
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Date: 1/24/2014 4:16:00 PM
What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
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Date: 1/23/2014 3:19:00 PM
enjoying this beautiful poem again, my friend - hope it's much warmer there now. Hope you're having a good week xx
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Date: 1/22/2014 7:19:00 PM
i can tell winter is your favorite season. but i love the way snow does the world. it's a perfect picture of what God see's when we wash ourselves in the blood. white as snow.
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Date: 1/19/2014 2:17:00 PM
- A really beautiful poem Phyllis - A winter gem! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem - Hope all is well with you .... no winter flu!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/14/2014 10:22:00 AM
Phyllis, I love the dropping jewels, very bright.. A nice way of saying winter go away... Loving mother nature.... xox..LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:46:00 PM
wonderful to see another gem from you, my friend. Have a happy week x
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Date: 1/12/2014 4:15:00 AM
Yes, a sparkling poem, Phyl! Jimbo
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Date: 1/11/2014 2:14:00 PM
Hmm...some people had too much snow others had too little, while some yearn to feel what its like to be in the snow. A nice descriptive poem.
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Date: 1/11/2014 10:50:00 AM
Beautiful picture Phyllis.
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