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1/11/2025 for Jasmine Or Flakes Poetry Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

Winter Jasmine

Tell me winter jasmine dear,
why did the sun disappear,
and leave me all alone, here?

I am heartbroken and cold,
as I grow sad, feeble and old,
with no one to love and hold.

The world became desolate.
My heart is filled with such regret.
My flower's gone.  I can't forget.

Yes, I'm winter jasmine, friend.
Your life is not at an end.
I to you, my heart extend,
and together we'll transcend.

I bloom in the winter to
help my mates to make it through.
Do you like my yellow hue?
I blossom just for you.

Look at what the future brings.
My flower always welcomes Springs.
I will pluck on your heartstrings,
until your spirit thaws and sings.
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February 4, 2025 at 9:17 AM
Dear david, this is such a poignant and heartfelt take on the prompt, i felt the emotions flowing within your welll woven lines, especially loved “ I am heartbroken and cold, as I grow sad, feeble and old, with no one to love and hold.” brilliant rhymes too. Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest
Crandall Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 6:22 PM
Thank you Ink! This contest resonated with me particularly.
Jones Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 2:18 PM
This is lovely! I especially like the last stanza David! Good luck in the contest!
Crandall Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 2:52 PM
Thank you, Karen - good to hear!
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 2:42 AM
- We have to ventilate our feelings in the winter time...give them colors ... and love :) - A lovely poem, David :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 12:14 PM
Aw, thank you Anne-Lise! :-)
Greenhough Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 9:21 PM
I hope my Christmas Cactus welcomes spring soon. Some flowers are eager to bloom, others, not so much. Good luck with the contest.
Crandall Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 9:28 PM
When cacti bloom, it's incredible - I can never get over the idea of a flower coming out of a cactus!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 11:05 AM
A cathartic write! Enjoyable, dear David!
Crandall Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Thanks Kim, I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate your kind comments!
Ibeh Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 6:17 PM
Just beautiful, David. This one looks like a winner to me.
Crandall Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 6:32 PM
Thanks so much Edward!
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