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Winter Is Not Forever

winked tortoise to the snail ~ the hare was already springing past summer Winter is not Forever Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley Howmanysyllables 17 15/02/23

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/19/2023 11:48:00 PM

Great monoku on the theme. Congratulations!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/20/2023 12:24:00 AM

Heya Chris, Perhaps a different approach taken to escape winter, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/19/2023 9:56:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. This is way toooooo cute. Have a blessed day writing away............................

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2023 10:36:00 AM

Thank you Paula, cuteness with a little savvy intended, not to get too far ahead of ourselves, cheers David

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/19/2023 12:52:00 AM

Congratulations David! Thank you for entering the 'Winter is not Forever' poetry contest!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2023 2:27:00 AM

Right back at you BJ, and thank you for the placement, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/16/2023 12:56:00 PM

A creative/fun write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/16/2023 1:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Paula for stopping by, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/16/2023 11:35:00 AM

David, you have a way with words. Getting too far away from home might cause our lives to run away from us, which is not only wise but also thought-provoking. Well done

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/16/2023 12:26:00 PM

Indeed Lasaad nothing in life is guaranteed except these seconds we’re living in, winter will end when it ends, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/16/2023 1:40:00 AM

Wonder what happened to the old fable.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/16/2023 2:14:00 AM

Oh I’m sure it’s still in here Victor, I just go a little deeper down the rabbit hole, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2023 4:59:00 PM

how unique this is and how wonderful.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2023 11:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, just enjoying the here and now, life will run away from us if we get too far ahead, cheers David