David Kavanagh Poet Monoku

Winter Is Not Forever

winked tortoise to the snail ~ the hare was already springing past summer 


Winter is not Forever Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley 
Howmanysyllables 17
15/02/23

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Christuraj Alex February 19, 2023 at 11:48 PM Great monoku on the theme. Congratulations! David Kavanagh February 20, 2023 at 12:24 AM Heya Chris, Perhaps a different approach taken to escape winter, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2023 at 9:56 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. This is way toooooo cute. Have a blessed day writing away............................ David Kavanagh February 19, 2023 at 10:36 AM Thank you Paula, cuteness with a little savvy intended, not to get too far ahead of ourselves, cheers David

Bj Legros Kelley February 19, 2023 at 12:52 AM Congratulations David! Thank you for entering the 'Winter is not Forever' poetry contest! David Kavanagh February 19, 2023 at 2:27 AM Right back at you BJ, and thank you for the placement, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith February 16, 2023 at 12:56 PM A creative/fun write. Have a blessed day writing away................. David Kavanagh February 16, 2023 at 1:56 PM Thank you so much Paula for stopping by, cheers David

Sotto Poet February 16, 2023 at 11:35 AM David, you have a way with words. Getting too far away from home might cause our lives to run away from us, which is not only wise but also thought-provoking. Well done David Kavanagh February 16, 2023 at 12:26 PM Indeed Lasaad nothing in life is guaranteed except these seconds we’re living in, winter will end when it ends, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar February 16, 2023 at 1:40 AM Wonder what happened to the old fable. David Kavanagh February 16, 2023 at 2:14 AM Oh I’m sure it’s still in here Victor, I just go a little deeper down the rabbit hole, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2023 at 4:59 PM how unique this is and how wonderful. David Kavanagh February 15, 2023 at 11:27 PM Thanks Andrea, just enjoying the here and now, life will run away from us if we get too far ahead, cheers David