Winter - In Absentia

Grass in the meadow
    so brittle and brown
  Landscape just as bleak
    throughout the small town

  When it's Winter's turn
    to take the stage
  It would be polite of Autumn
    to turn the page
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Legros Kelley Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 3:40 PM
Cute, hide the brown and sorrow beneath a blanket of white until it's springtime again! Where we live in the desert Southwest, we almost never have snow. It is dreary and rather disheartening in my garden. I think I'll invest in metal flowers because there is not much chance of autumn stepping aside for winter in my neck of the....cactus!
Romios Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 6:30 PM
BJ,,,hello! In my comment to Gershon.i made a spelling error. The first word should have been,,NOT. Sorry! I live in wine country…no snow. Trees very green here. Meditteranean climate. Only gets hot on occasion. Spring comes early.gorgeous flowers.. I love AZ, cactus, the desert…. water rafting. Love Spring Training, far hotter in AZ.Love Scottsdale, missed going to Sedona! Darn! Respect and love, Panagiota
Romios Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Nut brown in a Meditteranean climate where I live! Yesterday reminded me of Chicago winters. Those gray skies, depress me, Great verses, Gershon, Respect and love, Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Oh, those gray skies on those short, brutish winter days. Gloomy stuff alright. ~ Gershon
Tor Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Waiting for that page to turn my friend and it can't turn fast enough lol...
Daniel Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 11:01 PM
Sweet rhyme, Gershon:)
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