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Winter Hues

Drinking morning dews from grass; sun looks healthy, Housing red yellow rays, sky looks lovely and pretty. Mountain stands strong wearing deep green garment, Within white Kans grasses, river looks lovely at its best. With blessing of winter; trees smile nice bowing its head, Holding sweet tasty fruits; painting green, orange, red. Losing all its temper; Sun sleeps on flower petal nest, Bringing colors from heaven, garden paints better best. With intensity of darkness; thunder grows to its extreme, Earth perfumes well; swathing crust with sweet night queen. Couple feel well; getting pleasure of tight hugs at deep night, Consuming warmth of blanket,enjoying cold with sexual fight. Birds return nest for their best, early in the frosty evening, Wearing white vapor blanket, earth is dull in the morning. Making fire camp in morning, grandpa tells story of their own, How he purchased gold necklace, with present price of a gown. With waving golden crops; earth performs dance nice, Winter paints its best hues in the farmer’s innocent eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/15/2017 3:18:00 PM
Hello Manmath. Your words are clear and coherent. You grace us with imagery. Your last stanza/couplet is marvelous and speaks volumes. I loved it. You know how to express yourself nicely. Well done throughout.
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Date: 10/18/2016 4:15:00 AM
You have captured the joy and beauty of the season Manmath! A very lovely poem! 7 ; )
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Date: 10/16/2016 2:17:00 PM
Simply amazing!! This is a fav.
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Date: 10/15/2016 5:39:00 PM
With all your poems, after the first few words, I am back again in India. It is the wonderful way you describe your life there Manmath.
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Date: 10/11/2016 12:47:00 AM
Lovely couplet you penned here, Manmath. Your words transformed winter into richer hues looking for every possibility to enjoy many things about winter. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 10/8/2016 1:39:00 PM
Manamath you painted such wonderful images in my mind - the final line is superb!:-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 10/8/2016 10:47:00 AM
- I can see your painting clearly .... really beautiful, Manmath - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2016 1:54:00 PM
This are beautiful couplets, Manmath. I love 'Garden paints better best" "sexual fight" (a bit of humor), "white vapor blanket" Just lovely poetry. Thank you for sharing. I'm going to have to keep an eye on you:)
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:14:00 AM
Beautiful hues ... Strikingly deep last line ...
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