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Winter Haze

on hazy gray days I gaze up to the heavens to find your lost light… By: Tim Ryerson Date: 2/18/2014 Motif: Nature

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/3/2014 7:08:00 AM

You have illuminated beauty and grace in very few words, Tim. Love it.

Kathryn Collins

Date: 2/20/2014 6:24:00 AM

Hi Tim - Beautiful Tim. I feel it to my bones. love, Kathy

Roy Jerden

Date: 2/19/2014 5:26:00 PM

Unusual use of consonance and alliteration in a senryu. Great imagery!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/19/2014 2:44:00 PM

this is very creative with unexpected images creating a miniature insight into a part of seasonal grace, tim.. how interesting that the comments are longer than your delightful senryu.. wow.. huggs

Len Gasun

Date: 2/19/2014 10:44:00 AM

Very nice senryu my very dear friend Tim. so enjoyed. Thank u so much for sharing! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/19/2014 8:39:00 AM

Some lights are eternal, you will surely find the one you seek.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2014 8:14:00 AM

don't ever get Vista. I think they don't even do it any more. I think my computer is not normal!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2014 8:14:00 AM

I really like this. Sorry, I had saved your song in email and just realized I had not viewed it yet. I will get to it later, Tim! I end up saving downloads for when I am at school because my PC here at home can't seem to store downloads in a way that I can figure out how to view them. Hope I remember at school to check it out!!!

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 2/18/2014 10:22:00 AM

Nicely done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2014 7:48:00 AM

Great work..I feel that this is deeper than just looking for the sun..Thanks for the visit to my page..I imagine that the orange of the Monarch against the green of the ragweed would be a beautiful sight..Ragweed that makes us sneeze food for the butterflies..Sara

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/18/2014 7:37:00 AM

Beautiful, Tim.....I love it! You are so good with words......

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/18/2014 6:59:00 AM

This is a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem here this morning! My favorite line has to be, "on hazy gray days" that is a very descriptive line! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/18/2014 6:03:00 AM

tim, this pulls at my heartstrings, very emotive...I'm not a great fan of senryu and haiku, but when it's written in this way I enjoy it; I like the internal rhyme going on within it, tying in nicely with the title :) (look out for a future contest of mine for maverick/free haiku and senryu)