Winter Hawks

An advent of raptors haunts the scant gray woods
or loiters over mall roofs.
We wake to their screams as if this were high sierra,
not Ohio where parents try-out or manage children,
open party stores, hunker through the coming
and going of baby Jesus; de-ice puffer jackets,
tend to flocks.

Gloom is plowed behind snow dunes.
The red-tails roam in loose federations.
Their young, mob-handed and loutish,
the mature work in pairs
scything small birds, ripping through
the thinning, the hold-outs,
the weakened and walking.

And the first born listen with the last of us
while the hawks dance proclaiming their time.
A time of fervid litany and electric barricades,
of bobble hats and mittens,
while a black brier
raises bloody thorns in chary praise. 


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 4:43 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Anish Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:51 AM
This is powerful work with great images! Poetry power! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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March 13, 2016 at 11:27 PM
Eric, Nice to read this one again. LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 1:20 PM
Eric, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:35 PM
ERIC , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA
Ashford Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Hi Linda, thanks for your kind review. Yes, please do enter the poem in your comp! Take care eric
Hunter Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 6:38 AM
Wow, this is something. It's so unique and has a mysterious quality to it. Welcome to the soup and keep up the good work!
Ashford Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Thanks Caleb much obliged for the positive feedback.
Van Breda Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 5:04 PM
This is an amazingly talented introduction to P/Soup. You have a way with words--keep writing !
Ashford Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Thank you Kim, I fear it may be overwritten in parts and am open to any edit suggestions. I have just joined and am trying to figure out the forum. When I do I hope to add some comments and reviews on other folks works. Thanks again for your kind welcome.
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