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Winter Haiku Series

Winter Haiku Series 2021 —————————. life hides from and flees the winter changes winter’s falling tears freeze more cold for short days signals the long sleep owls fill prairie dogs’ burrows frosted windows my visitors cancel an angel’s choir brings cheer —————————————————— (c) sally young Eslinger 11/2021 Glory to God…..miss you Charlie

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2022 4:52:00 AM

I like these. Those that live where it is so cold must see some beautiful sights but also must be challenged to make it through the long cold winter. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/18/2021 9:36:00 PM

Wow, chilly poetry, love these, so apt.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/19/2021 7:43:00 AM

Delighted thanks go to you for your comment. I am so glad you were touched by these lines. Hugs and blessings asked for your day. sally

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/18/2021 6:04:00 AM

You captured the cold of winter in a remarkable way. ~~

Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/19/2021 7:49:00 AM

Hi, Victor! You have frost over there yet? We have, but yesterday the trees here were at their splendor height.. thank you for reading and commenting. I have an eye infection, missing some days here.Hugs! sally

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/16/2021 8:25:00 PM

Very picturesque of the cold bleakness of winter, and I also like the thread of hope on your last line ~

Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/19/2021 7:55:00 AM

Hi, Michelle! We had a major frost the morning I wrote this and I even had to order a quilted coat :-). Complimented by your words of comment. I try to see the end-good in everything…that helps survival. Take care!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/14/2021 6:25:00 PM

great imagery in all three verses.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/19/2021 7:59:00 AM

So glad you stopped by to read and comment. Thank you, Eve. Your views help me grow as a poet. Hugs, sally

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/14/2021 12:40:00 PM

Hello Sally Eslinger, Snow flurries here but I think it is just snowing now. the ground is getting covered the snowflakes. Your poem is beautifully done. Hugs.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/19/2021 8:05:00 AM

Thank you for your commenting. I missed some days on PS, sorry for late reply. I am touched by how poets love snow—it has a array of characteristics over the cold. Stay warm and inspired! sally