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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/1/2019 10:52:00 AM

Lovely haiku with big punchline, James.

James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/1/2019 11:04:00 AM

Thanks so much Line!

Victoria Teo

Date: 9/2/2019 2:18:00 AM

I like this very much! The message is so powerful with very little words.

James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/2/2019 2:46:00 PM

Thank you Victoria...

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/17/2017 12:09:00 AM

Nicely penned, I too have missed this place...-R

James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/17/2017 7:39:00 AM

Thanks Raul!

Bawa Talwar

Date: 7/10/2017 6:31:00 PM

Wow great job done very profound indeed. Thank u for reading my work!

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/24/2016 11:46:00 AM

Deep three lines.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/29/2015 2:50:00 AM

Wow, quite a gripping and intriguing haiku, that leaves me reflecting deeply..awesome job!Always, Laura

Daver Austin

Date: 4/8/2015 10:02:00 AM

Trying to let go. This is a fine haiku, James. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2015 10:58:00 PM

James, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/5/2015 8:09:00 PM

This is a nice evocative poem. The last line means a lot to me. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/20/2014 3:31:00 PM

Well I put this as 1st past the post James, good to 'sink' into your words today..'

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/19/2014 4:06:00 PM

jimbo!..I like how this 'ku can mean many things...the last line is smashing!.. good to have you back.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2014 7:27:00 AM

- Great haiku, James !!! - I will bring you beautiful wishes for Christmas - I hope you will get a lovely time with your family and friends - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/15/2014 3:17:00 PM

love the imaginary in this excellent pen james

Paul Callus

Date: 12/15/2014 9:48:00 AM

Excellent James! The imagery and final thought are so good. #7 // paul

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 12/15/2014 7:43:00 AM

I'm sitting here in the comfort of summer's infancy, so I can say, love it. The imagery sends a chill up my spine, but it doesn't last long. Enjoy your winter.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2014 4:39:00 PM

lovely imagery - great haiku:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2014 2:49:00 PM

I feel like that drop sometimes..Way to go..Very unique and creative work..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara