Winter Haiku

Here I sit at work
watching snow tumbling down
thinking about home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Talbot Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 12:02 PM
Hellow Teresa, Here I sit alone, admiring the image you have painted with words, A snapshot of a very special moment. Welcome to Poetry Soup, and keep on writing haiku! Season greetings... Mick
A   Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:45 AM
Teresa Adkins, awesome haiku. LINDA
Thajudeen Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 2:59 AM
A snap shot,lovely.Regards dear poet Adkins. -Safa
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 7:46 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Teresa - I choose your first great haiku - I love haiku poems :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Halliday Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Nice thoughtful seasonal haiku.
A  Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 9:37 PM
Teresa, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
Enriquez Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Dear Teresa: Nicely said, this haiku moment. Leon
Meade Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 7:47 PM
I always like being home during a snow storm!! work always seems to be getting in the way of fun things. You caught the moment. Nicely done.
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 5:32 PM
I'd rather be at home thinking why I cant get into work LOL - great write:-) Hugs Jan xx
Adkins Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 1:43 PM
Jan, I love "snow days" as much as my students, so I know where you're coming from!
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