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Winter Haiku 1-2-3 Or 3-2-1

Winter Haiku 1-2-3 or 3-2-1

cold
frost, snow 
on schedule

days
zero 
below temp

shed
blend in
animals

pond
frozen
fish swimming 

ice
melting
sunny day

9/21/2018

Poetry Contest: haiku 1-2-3 or 3-2-1 
Sponsored by: charles messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pett Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve with your wonderful string of haiku, enjoyed my friend. :))
Doll Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Great imagery. Congratulations on your win, Eve. ~Warren
Black Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Ahh.. wow! What a great image you are representing Eve.... So beautiful and so unique. congratulation for the win.
Messina Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Great imagery Eve. Wonderful job on this new form of haiku. Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering my contest...Charlie :)
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 4:35 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Nature's cycle. Congrats on your top win, Eve.
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 11:39 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Well done, Eve! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:11 PM
So nice, Eve. I liked your enclosed rhyme too but my keyboard is not letting me put numbers sometimes so i was unable to leave my comment for the number in my capcha at that one.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Great capture of Nature in different beauties! Enjoyed reading.. the best of luck in the contest dear Eve. My warmest wishes. Stay blessed.
Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Good work. Enjoyed reading.. I often wonder how fish survive when it gets so cold that the ponds and lakes freeze. I guess there must be some spots that are not frozen. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 7:38 PM
GREAT, Eve! Janice
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 5:43 PM
lovely string of winter poems. i chose autumn for mine:-) hugs Jan xx
Rose  Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 4:03 PM
There is always longing after a long winter chill, lets hope Spring will follow close to its heal this year. Nice set of winter haikus Eve. Hugs
Wigley Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 2:07 AM
Clever haiku, Eve, good luck! Viv x
Cunningham Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 11:50 PM
Great haiku Eve, good luck. Tom.
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