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Winter Forest

A winter forest Frosted leaves lay heaped around Hedgehog sleeps within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/9/2012 4:49:00 PM
Beautiful. Love the frosted leaves bit and the warm hedghodge to add a little variation. I can see it all now, and in such little words. Much enjoyed, of course! Da!~ Always, Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/9/2012 4:49:00 PM
hedgehog rather :D
Date: 2/4/2012 3:56:00 PM
This is about as good a haiku as anyone can write. Very descriptive.
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Date: 2/4/2012 8:47:00 AM
Bravo...well done Nick. - hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/4/2012 1:37:00 AM
I think I would prefer to sleep through it, too...clearly the hedgehog isn't so dumb. ;-)
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Date: 2/3/2012 9:08:00 PM
Nick.. a wonderful haiku... always..pd
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Date: 2/3/2012 12:49:00 PM
I like the imagery in your haiku, Nick. Good job. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/3/2012 10:47:00 AM
made me shiver Light & Love
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