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Winter Forest

A winter forest Frosted leaves lay heaped around Hedgehog sleeps within

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/9/2012 4:49:00 PM

Beautiful. Love the frosted leaves bit and the warm hedghodge to add a little variation. I can see it all now, and in such little words. Much enjoyed, of course! Da!~ Always, Laura

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/9/2012 4:49:00 PM

hedgehog rather :D

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2012 3:56:00 PM

This is about as good a haiku as anyone can write. Very descriptive.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/4/2012 8:47:00 AM

Bravo...well done Nick. - hugs Anne-Lise

Darryl Davis

Date: 2/4/2012 1:37:00 AM

I think I would prefer to sleep through it, too...clearly the hedgehog isn't so dumb. ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2012 9:08:00 PM

Nick.. a wonderful haiku... always..pd

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/3/2012 12:49:00 PM

I like the imagery in your haiku, Nick. Good job. Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/3/2012 10:47:00 AM

made me shiver Light & Love