Winter Forest

A winter forest
Frosted leaves lay heaped around
Hedgehog sleeps within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Breidenthal Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 4:49 PM
Beautiful. Love the frosted leaves bit and the warm hedghodge to add a little variation. I can see it all now, and in such little words. Much enjoyed, of course! Da!~ Always, Laura
Breidenthal Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 4:49 PM
hedgehog rather :D
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 3:56 PM
This is about as good a haiku as anyone can write. Very descriptive.
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Bravo...well done Nick. - hugs Anne-Lise
Davis Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 1:37 AM
I think I would prefer to sleep through it, too...clearly the hedgehog isn't so dumb. ;-)
A   Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 9:08 PM
Nick.. a wonderful haiku... always..pd
Merryman Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 12:49 PM
I like the imagery in your haiku, Nick. Good job. Love, Kim
Guzzi Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 10:47 AM
made me shiver Light & Love
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