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Winter fetches a hillock of the wind and downpour. Exacerbating people to mislay their blight core. Peculiar demesne keepers are utterly aroused. While tiny dwellings, slums are bulldozed. Flush breaks out among the poorest of the poor. Thoroughly jiggling, they shiver in the spongy cure. None of the people around me appear to descry them. They are enduring dull, agonizing demise mayhem. In the midst of the winters harshest season, The scenery is desolate, and homes sap blacken. Snow inversely overwhelms everything. Making hills that are huge and transcending. People in neediness succumb to the winter. While we continue to offer a hefty fee for a heater, We tuck ourselves into our cozy beds for the night. People have stuck to death all around from frostbite. Relish life by humming songs of love every day. I'm unconcerned if it's winter or summer ray. The universe is a child's hand on your shoulder. When life is volatile, death lacks uniqueness jolter.
Written: January 15, 2022 Winter Wonders Within Nature Poetry Contest Sponsored by: M. L. Kiser

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Date: 1/16/2022 6:41:00 AM
A great compilation, unique for the juxtaposition of life and death amidst the quivering cold, still with the volatility of the universe and death failure for unique jolter.... Silpika
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Date: 1/16/2022 1:12:00 AM
Death doesn't take much to jolt you out of your life span. Beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/15/2022 12:59:00 PM
PS Love the pic.
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Date: 1/15/2022 12:58:00 PM
When you are cold and hungry it is hard to see the beauty of a winter scene. When you are suffering and struggling to survive it is hard to believe there is a God who loves you. We must give warmth, food and shelter to those who have need in order for them to hear The Word. We must SHOW them God's love in order for them to believe in it. A fine write with an important message. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/15/2022 12:12:00 PM
Very evocative of the bleakness of winter, best wishes for the contest~
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Date: 1/15/2022 12:11:00 PM
Nice blending of nature and emotions, Lassad. Lovely write. Great advice: Relish life by humming songs of love every day...
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