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Waiting, gifted, transitory, A white crust of bread Each snowflake the better part of me Sun rising over snow laden barn; Owls retire, Stroked by sunbeam fingers Much softer than my own. It is a time of downy mornings calling Through a chilly air to kiss my breath: “Wake up Jake, the pump is frozen” I’m awake. Sheets are laid across the pond. Beneath; the water sleeps As ice breaks on the bow Of every duck as They cross in columns Leaving ice cubes in their wake. Winter’s breadcrumbs; Marking trails for their return, Spilling the ice From mother nature’s trays. A crunching sound of footsteps Travels miles to be near. Deer will twitch and flick a favored ear. Icy needles, spiky columns Ice glistening On each winter’s retina As cold invades Every winter bone.

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Date: 9/15/2021 5:34:00 PM
Immediate and almost tactile images, conveyed with simple but pleasing well chosen words. A lovely poem deserving of more attention. Very well written, Vernon.
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Date: 9/2/2021 4:12:00 PM
Wonderful images, Vernon. Nice work.
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