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Winter Dreams

Waiting,  gifted,  transitory,
A white crust of bread
Each snowflake the better part of me
Sun rising over snow laden barn;
Owls retire,
Stroked by sunbeam fingers
Much softer than my own.
It is a time of downy mornings calling
Through a chilly air to kiss my breath:
“Wake up Jake, the pump is frozen”
I’m awake.		
Sheets are laid across the pond.
Beneath; the water sleeps
As ice breaks on the bow 
Of every duck as
They cross in columns 
Leaving ice cubes in their wake. 
Winter’s breadcrumbs; 
Marking trails for their return,
Spilling the ice 
From mother nature’s trays.
A crunching sound of footsteps
Travels miles to be near.
Deer will twitch and flick a favored ear.
Icy needles, spiky columns
Ice glistening 
On each winter’s retina 
As cold invades
Every winter bone.
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Brewer Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 5:34 PM
Immediate and almost tactile images, conveyed with simple but pleasing well chosen words. A lovely poem deserving of more attention. Very well written, Vernon.
Hankins Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Wonderful images, Vernon. Nice work.
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