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Winter Dream

Drab ‘tho the world may seem 
All bleak and stripped 
of summer green
Long after summer sun has dipped
Spring dreams reflect on trees - ice tipped. 

December 19th 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Messina Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 3:36 AM
Such a lovely quintain, Suz. I especially like it because you wrote it on my birth date (lol) Thank s for stopping by...hugs Charlie
Delaney Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 4:08 AM
Hey Charlie: Hope you had a wonderful birthday. I love to give unexpected gifts. Happy New Year. SuZ
Brewer Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 6:33 PM
An elegant little gem of glittering word facets.
Delaney Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 4:04 AM
Thanks Geoffrey
Calasibetta Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 4:42 PM
An extraordinary Quintain~your imagery delightful and your message of hope so beautifully expressed. Wishing you a very Happy New Year! Paulette
Delaney Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 4:04 AM
Thanks Paulette: Back to wish you a Happy 2022. The year is already whizzing by. Wishing you lots of inspiration in the year ahead. I posted my poem, “Being your Eyes for Swell.Best, SuZ
Callus Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 12:39 PM
This is beautiful, with delightful rhymes and it flows so smoothly, Suz. I love the end line...the cherry on the cake! ~ Warm regards and hugs, my friend // paul
Delaney Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 4:00 AM
Thanks Paul: I appreciate your kind words and friendship. Best, SuZ
Buehler Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Beautiful thoughts, conveyed well through magnificent imagery. I love the picture, too. :) Evelyn
Delaney Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 3:59 AM
I appreciate your thoughtful comment, Evelyn I wish you a wonderful 2022. January went too quickly. SuZ
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December 29, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Very pretty, Suz!
Delaney Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 3:56 AM
Thanks Kim: Your comments mean a lot to me. Hugs,SuZ
Brewer Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 3:31 AM
Atmospheric images with a sparkling finish. Well done! Suzanne.
Delaney Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 3:55 AM
Many thanks for taking the time to comment. I know I visited your page to respond but I also wanted to acknowledge your response here. Best, SuZ
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December 21, 2021 at 3:46 AM
- Beautiful poem, SuZ - I wish you a wonderful Christmas and a blessed new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 3:53 AM
A late reply to your lovely comment on Winter Dream. I appreciate your friendship. Hope you are well. Hugs, SuZ
Babbit Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Wow, simple and beautiful.
Delaney Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 4:37 PM
Many thanks for reading and for your kind words. Cheers, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 5:04 AM
A beautiful write SuZ. Loved your theme.
Delaney Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 4:36 PM
Dear Vijay: Always a joy to receive your kind comments. Hope it’s not too early to wish you a wonderful Christmas. Best, SuZ
Cunningham Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 3:47 AM
As we approach the shortest day we're already looking beyond the gloom to spring. Best of luck in the contest Suz. Tom
Delaney Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 4:34 PM
So nice to see you, Tom: I hope your Christmas is cozy and full of fun and laughter. SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 6:48 PM
Oh, I love this magical Quintain SuZ. This beauty is certain to be on the winner’s list. Eloquent rhyme, and that ending line catapults this into the stratosphere! Mele Kalikimaka my friend. Blessings xxoo
Delaney Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Thanks Connie: I always value your support and kind words.
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