Winter Dodoitsu

Winter Dodoitsu

          Boxwood hedge hides shy snow drops.
         Birch with ivory-white bark
         thawed heart of barren winter.
            Little warmth, My Dear !

   11/09/15
    Contest Winter Dodoitsu
     4th place


  Contest NO. 261 by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 5:46 PM
Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Dutta Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 6:29 PM
Thanks Sara Anisha
A  Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Anisha, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT
Dutta Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Thanks SKAT A
Merryman Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Nicely done, Anisha! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Dutta Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 6:32 PM
Thanks Kim Love Anisha
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Beautifully penned Anisha congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Thanks. Love. Anisha
Fleming Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 12:52 PM
I do not know a great deal about Dodoitsu. However...This strikes me as being rather good! One of the best I have read actually - Well done! My best regards, Anisha:) john
Dutta Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 5:39 PM
Thank you so much, John I have also no idea. This is my first attempt just following the syllable count as instructed. Anisha D
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 6:32 AM
enjoyed the read Anisha.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
Dutta Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Thanks Good Day Anisha D
Juman Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 2:00 AM
Most brilliant Anisha you have got the knock for writing please do check out mines thanks
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