Winter Delay

Winter Delay



              A gypsy man adorned by a hood
              clad in multilayered robe,
              comes to usher to the masses
              about the magic of season.
             

              With your graceful silhouetted grey figure
              give your alms to my country,
              you most awaited guest that
              this year has delayed.
              Spread yours feathers like ,
              snow flakes, snow drifts,snow beds,
              creamy layers in the north,
              undrape your cold wave in the metros
              with a boom in the market of
              beverages and sizzlers,
              shower  chill breeze to towns 
              and cities,and take the warm cloth industry
              to a higher graph,bonfire will add to the decor of hotels 
              and also villages,will hear birdies chirp when it dawns

              Alas! In my country,this year you delayed,
              Why? Why? my country men ask,
              are you disappointed by the intolerance among the
              brethen to achieve power.... ..social issues,
              caste discrimination,minority expolitation,
              inequality and so on......

               Anyways,excuse them.Humans err.
               They will try to recompense.

               Your cool,icy breeze leaves a shivering
               current in me,fog is all around,stars come in 
               the early evening,its all chill chill,
               meeting you exalts my soul to 
               a solemn mood,thanking GOD,
               for the wonderful you
               WINTER , my gypsy, I love you,
               forgive and forget.......
 


              Rizwana Bhurani
              15.11.2015
              for contest...Write me a Winter poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/7/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thank you. for your kind comments.....regards.....m waiting for my creative phase.
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Date: 2/6/2016 8:56:00 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:49:00 PM
Grats on your winning write.
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Date: 11/20/2015 4:09:00 AM
Thank you.....good day
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Date: 11/20/2015 12:49:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write rizwana!
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:20:00 PM
Rizwana, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/19/2015 10:24:00 PM
Thank you,wish you the same.....regards
Date: 11/19/2015 2:10:00 PM
wonderful imagery Rizwana congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/20/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thank you...wish you hearty congrats
Date: 11/17/2015 5:47:00 PM
Thank you for your greetings....I look forward to read more of your poems......m an ardent fan of Shakespeare....love archaicpoetry coz after all old is gold.....regards
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Date: 11/17/2015 4:57:00 PM
Hello Rizwana!! Thanks for commenting on my recent Sonnet that was awarded Poem of the Day!! I noticed that you are relatively new to Poetry Soup. On that note, I want to take a moment to personally welcome you to our poetry association!! You are more than welcome to read any of my poetry as you might choose to do so. And there are many others too that have great poetry posted on the Soup that you might be interested in!! "Winter Delay" is great!! A "7"!! Best Luck in the contest. Cheers, Gary
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