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Winter Crocus

in a sunny location on a chilly winter day I found a snow flower beautiful and gay oh, vivid was this purple crocus so sweet and it had not a care or a need to grow in the heat it just poked it's delicate head through the snow unmindful of cool winds and whispered hello it was really a lovely and unexpected bright display and I found leaving this lovely snow flower bittersweet but, I knew into spring it would grow ... _______________ June 18, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/winter crocus Copyright Protected, ID 06-1365-292-18 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (June 19) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/20/2021 First Place

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Date: 6/22/2021 6:15:00 PM
Beautifully written, Constance! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/23/2021 6:43:00 AM
Kim, thank you for the compliment and congrats, serenity is my wish for you, love _Constance
Date: 6/21/2021 9:50:00 PM
Wonderfully beautiful imagery, seeing this flower, and congrats for the first place
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Date: 6/22/2021 6:08:00 AM
Aniruddha, thank you for the compliment and congrats, peace _Constance
Date: 6/21/2021 5:25:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/21/2021 7:09:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations, peace _Constance
Date: 6/20/2021 4:46:00 AM
Constance, this is a beautiful, well-written piece. Janice
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Date: 6/21/2021 7:09:00 AM
Janice, thank you so much for the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 6/18/2021 2:06:00 PM
A delightful poem, Constance--as beautiful as the flower it describes. I see it rising through snow--whispering hello.
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Date: 6/18/2021 2:42:00 PM
Vijay, thanks for the compliment and the lovely comment, love _Constance
Date: 6/18/2021 1:15:00 PM
what wonderful imagery, they are such vibrant flowers Constance ,:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/18/2021 1:45:00 PM
Jan, thank you for the visit and compliment, appreciate, love _Constance

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