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Winter Contemplations

Ripples of vibrant streams stagnate
Songs of flapping birds relocate
Forest rustles hibernate

Skeletal trees shake, underdressed
Mushy, scabbed apples numbly rest
Brisk, harsh breezes pierce life's chest

Pruned trees develop healing scars
Skies of pewter, stone, and smudged chars
Meet to contemplate the stars

Sorrow and indifference blend
A crocus and daylight ascend
~The beginning of death's end

1/21/2021

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Date: 1/21/2021 4:46:00 PM
I love the last verse of this beautiful poem, and how it ended on a positive note, with the promise that is spring's beginning. :=)
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:59:00 PM
Lovely sights and sounds paint your winter scenes, Juliet--so well written.
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:16:00 PM
Love the imagery, Juliet!
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