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Winter Contemplations

Ripples of vibrant streams stagnate Songs of flapping birds relocate Forest rustles hibernate Skeletal trees shake, underdressed Mushy, scabbed apples numbly rest Brisk, harsh breezes pierce life's chest Pruned trees develop healing scars Skies of pewter, stone, and smudged chars Meet to contemplate the stars Sorrow and indifference blend A crocus and daylight ascend ~The beginning of death's end 1/21/2021

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Date: 1/21/2021 4:46:00 PM
I love the last verse of this beautiful poem, and how it ended on a positive note, with the promise that is spring's beginning. :=)
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:59:00 PM
Lovely sights and sounds paint your winter scenes, Juliet--so well written.
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:16:00 PM
Love the imagery, Juliet!
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