Winter Comes Down

Stealing down from the wooded high country
With its brown, red, white hills, and snow-hung tress,
Down from the crags in frosty grasses, and down from the rocky

Ridges and crowded lakes,
Down from those hungry coyote pups
The winter comes whistling and winding like eagles

Across this vast California land
And beauty as knife-edged blasts of leafs briefly
Kiss my face and beneath its blanketing hibernate cold

I just laughing and flattering with my dog
With such tangle of happiness!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gorelick Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 11:16 PM
LIke this George..not a haiku though...love the second stanza..its a beauty. BG
Zamalea Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Barbara, thank you, and you are right. I pressed too quick the key and haiku came up. I appreciate your observation. Again, thanks.
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