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Winter clings to my aching bones: sending chills running down my spine. Searching for any sign of Spring, my heart hungers for a warm breeze. Sending chills running down my spine, Winter's a season to survive. My heart hungers for a warm breeze, inhaling Winter's freezing breath. Winter's a season to survive, instincts honed to a razor's edge. Inhaling Winter's freezing breath; Winter's kiss oft tastes bittersweet. Instincts honed to a razor's edge: my emotions become extreme. Winter's kiss oft tastes bittersweet, as Her frozen lips numb my heart. My emotions become extreme, Winter's stay is crushing my hopes. As Her frozen lips numb my heart, pursuing dreams that never were. Winter's stay is crushing my hopes, searching for any sign of Spring. Pursuing dreams that never were, Winter clings to my aching bones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/17/2018 10:47:00 AM
I see you went the non traditional style with your rhyme pattern. This is a well done pantoum. This style is a favorite of mine to write as the poem help write itself, and is a great style to write a story. Well done Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/17/2018 2:07:00 PM
Thanks Charles, I appreciate your support and input my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/11/2018 12:19:00 PM
Well done, Emile. Lovely lines.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/11/2018 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/10/2018 10:10:00 AM
Well written Emile, have only written one and I did struggle if I'm honest . Tom
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Date: 8/10/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Tom, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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