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Winter Cardinal

A non-contest poem.

In the snowy winter, there shines a crimson spark, 
A beautiful cardinal perches, looking hardy and bright, 
Its songs resonate through forest stark, 
A beacon in the frosted white,  
Its warmth defies the bitterness in hazy daylight.  

The branches sag with icy weight, 
Yet sitting on it, cardinal sings its tune without fear, 
A melody defying future and fate, 
A whispered hope for all to hear,  
Its courage blooming year to year.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 8:36 PM
The cardinal in crimson shade sitting and singing in an expanse of snow is indeed "a beacon in the frosted white". A single image, projected so beautifully.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 12:32 PM
I love cardinals and your poem. God bless you, love, Gina
Rose  Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 3:48 PM
Wow ! You released all the splendor of the bird and winter at the same time, I love it Jay
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Very nicely done on your mom contest poem. Maybe can be used in a future contest of Brian
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:42 AM
- A lovely poem, Jay - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 11:13 AM
What a lovely write you have here. Great/pretty picture. I love the cardinal birds. None here but I had them at my last home. I sure do miss them.... Have a fun day as you write away..................
M  Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 10:18 AM
Just love this Jay….worded beautifully! Debx
Poet Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 10:07 AM
Very well-composed poem, with profound metaphors. And the picture matches exactly your words.
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