David Mohn Poet Tanka

Winter Butterflies

swollen clouds conceive
      moisture dons it’s rain cocoon
             falling softly down
      mother natures frozen breath
    birthing wings of crystaled grace


                   David Mohn
                  13 Nov 2015
Write Me A Winter Poem – Poetry Contest

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Casarah Nance November 20, 2015 at 3:45 PM Wow, that is descriptively beautiful, well said.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 20, 2015 at 12:46 AM Congrats on ur great win with this very lovely tanka david!

Skat A November 19, 2015 at 8:19 PM David, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**

Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 1:55 PM wonderful metaphor congrats on your win David:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2015 at 9:05 PM I love that metaphor for it. Just lovely, David.