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Winter Burden

Heavy clumps of white fall from the grey sky landing on wooden limbs, weighing them down like dark skeletons bent under the burden of generations of sorrow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/12/2009 4:00:00 PM
Powerful words ... visual effects.. great writing, Krista, keep at it...blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:11:00 PM
The Christmas season seems to bring out such brilliant poetry from all the poets here at PoetrySoup making you all ~~~Poet Extraordinaires~~~. I thank you for sharing your poetry with us all through the year Krista. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2009 6:57:00 PM
nice thought with this work!!!!!! an interesting take on the stress that nature puts on itself or that we as people could also be struggling under generations of sorrow!
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Date: 12/8/2009 5:59:00 PM
Such a profound, melancholy look at winter. Lovely poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:10:00 PM
Never thought of it that way, but it's a very original perspective of snow on the tree boughs. Nice work, Krista! Love, carolyn
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Date: 12/8/2009 3:16:00 PM
Nicely descriptive write. I can just see the scene. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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