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Winter Blues Concluded

I lay in my frozen bed, teeth ruthlessly chattering.
Intense darkness made me rise and stretch a bit. 
The useless coverlet hardly warmed my shoulders,
As from outside thunder boomed and rattled panes.
An electric storm evolved into terrible lightening,
Flashes that threatened destruction, yet I looked out.
Icicles hung along the wires and ledges all around.
Down below the bora-like gale even uprooted some trees.
Not a vehicle was in sight, all returned to their homes. 
But what is home without heat?  Might as well try an igloo.
It’s warmer and full of shelter there I’m sure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Jayasankar Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 3:24 AM
Winter blue imagery well created Victor with a nice picture too ... ~ Ani
Ball Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 11:33 PM
WoW! That's some pic here Victor. Very nice. It sounds like you are experiencing a hurricane in this one. Excellent expression and imagery. As always a fine read. God Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 1:20 AM
Brr I could feel winters chill in your verse Victor. They say we might get a beast from the east or a snow bomb very soon. Tom
Roper Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 10:55 PM
I thought it was warm where you live.. I wonder how an igloo would keep anybody warm. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Buhagiar Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 11:02 PM
Cold and humid.
Pandit Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 2:47 PM
I feel the blues. Wonderfully described, as always, Victor. Must be really cold if igloo is warmer.
Dome Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Love the visuals my friend i could feel the cold. well done. pete.
Nicole Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:35 PM
A home without heat. Oh my !! I would cover up and stay still. You paint such vivid images with your words. I hope you are doing well my dear friend. Staying warm. Soon, Spring will be here. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Andresen Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:00 PM
- Or do as the bear ... :) - Stay warm, my friend Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 12:38 PM
vivid imagery Victor, I guess with suitable clothing a igloo could be surprisingly warm:-) hugs jan xx
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