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Winter Blues

Tiny tips of green thrusting their way through the cold earth You look and scratch your head and wonder, what did i plant there Its cold, the tiny bulbs shiver as though close to death Being a friendly gardener I try to block the wind  with care Be off with you winter you've been here far to long move over for the spring You have had your monents your chances to shine You brought the snow to impress us and make childrens voices ring Winter blues are all but over now , spring will be just fine. Snow is beautiful I must admit,soft yet scrunchy underneath your feet The snowman the children built did look rather swell Carrot nose sultana eyes and clothes I hadnt  finished with yet But with the sun peeping out, poor snowman doesnt look so well So wintry sun are you the guide  for springs sunshine, you pathe the way So those poor tips of green will grow  and bring forth flowers galore The daffodils, tulips, freesia and snowdrops, loving the day That the  sun will help you forget those winter  blues for sure. Dated January 16th. 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/4/2013 1:39:00 PM
A nice long one just how I like them! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on a deserving win, Seren! Annalise
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/4/2013 10:53:00 AM
Thank you annalise, who is that delicious child in the pic, she is adorable ...Seren
Date: 2/4/2013 9:08:00 AM
Outstanding!
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Date: 2/4/2013 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Richard...seren
Date: 2/4/2013 9:04:00 AM
I love the cleverness of that poor sickly snowman!! Such a cute twist to the poem! Congratulations, Seren!!
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Date: 2/4/2013 9:25:00 AM
Poor snowman they dont last long do they...Seren
Date: 2/4/2013 2:26:00 AM
Hi there congrats on another win luv this is great, it really does make one long for spring but shows the beauty of winter too xx
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Date: 2/4/2013 9:26:00 AM
congrats to you too Mandy, yes spring will be more than welcome...Seren
Date: 2/3/2013 11:24:00 PM
congratulations on your winning write..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/4/2013 9:27:00 AM
Thanks for the congrats Mehnaz ...Seren
Date: 2/3/2013 10:31:00 PM
many congrats on your win in the contest Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/3/2013 10:35:00 PM
Thank you Francine .....Seren
Date: 2/3/2013 10:02:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/4/2013 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Linda ...Seren
Date: 1/16/2013 4:27:00 AM
hi Seren,, this is really beautiful,, such amazing sincerity in your writing, you bring to the reader a sense of living the words you write,, you remind me of another wonderful Golden poet on this site.... love this... p.s and to think i came back from living in aussie, just to experience the "Winter Blues" again
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 11:14:00 AM
haha you must be mad, nah its much better here in the UK. she says mumble mumble mumble
Date: 1/15/2013 9:58:00 PM
Hi Seren, what a great piece you have done here dear friend, and good luck in the contest. Rollo
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 11:15:00 AM
thanks Rollo not sure if I have entered it yet.
Date: 1/15/2013 9:15:00 PM
nicely penned Seren.... good luck in the contest
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Joseph ... Seren
Date: 1/15/2013 8:36:00 PM
This is a spectacular and wondrous write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening and pleasantly expressive poem this evening! You have delighted me with this masterful piece, I love this write! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 8:55:00 PM
Thank you Russell

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