Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

Winter Blues

Tiny tips of green thrusting their way through the cold earth
You look and scratch your head and wonder, what did i plant there
Its cold, the tiny bulbs shiver as though close to death
Being a friendly gardener I try to block the wind  with care

Be off with you winter you've been here far to long move over for the spring
You have had your monents your chances to shine
You brought the snow to impress us and make childrens voices ring
Winter blues are all but over now , spring will be just fine.

Snow is beautiful I must admit,soft yet scrunchy underneath your feet
The snowman the children built did look rather swell
Carrot nose sultana eyes and clothes I hadnt  finished with yet
But with the sun peeping out, poor snowman doesnt look so well

So wintry sun are you the guide  for springs sunshine, you pathe the way
So those poor tips of green will grow  and bring forth flowers galore
The daffodils, tulips, freesia and snowdrops, loving the day
That the  sun will help you forget those winter  blues for sure.





Dated January 16th. 2013

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Debbie Guzzi February 4, 2013 at 1:39 PM A nice long one just how I like them! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick February 4, 2013 at 10:37 AM Congratulations on a deserving win, Seren! Annalise Seren Roberts February 4, 2013 at 10:53 AM Thank you annalise, who is that delicious child in the pic, she is adorable ...Seren

Richard Lamoureux February 4, 2013 at 9:08 AM Outstanding! Seren Roberts February 4, 2013 at 9:25 AM Thank you Richard...seren

Carrie Richards February 4, 2013 at 9:04 AM I love the cleverness of that poor sickly snowman!! Such a cute twist to the poem! Congratulations, Seren!! Seren Roberts February 4, 2013 at 9:25 AM Poor snowman they dont last long do they...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 4, 2013 at 2:26 AM Hi there congrats on another win luv this is great, it really does make one long for spring but shows the beauty of winter too xx Seren Roberts February 4, 2013 at 9:26 AM congrats to you too Mandy, yes spring will be more than welcome...Seren

Mehnaz Veetil February 3, 2013 at 11:24 PM congratulations on your winning write.. Seren Roberts February 4, 2013 at 9:27 AM Thanks for the congrats Mehnaz ...Seren

Francine Roberts February 3, 2013 at 10:31 PM many congrats on your win in the contest Seren Seren Roberts February 3, 2013 at 10:35 PM Thank you Francine .....Seren

Poet Destroyer A February 3, 2013 at 10:02 PM Seren, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA Seren Roberts February 4, 2013 at 9:27 AM Thank you Linda ...Seren

Harry Horsman January 16, 2013 at 4:27 AM hi Seren,, this is really beautiful,, such amazing sincerity in your writing, you bring to the reader a sense of living the words you write,, you remind me of another wonderful Golden poet on this site.... love this... p.s and to think i came back from living in aussie, just to experience the "Winter Blues" again Seren Roberts January 16, 2013 at 11:14 AM haha you must be mad, nah its much better here in the UK. she says mumble mumble mumble

Rollo West January 15, 2013 at 9:58 PM Hi Seren, what a great piece you have done here dear friend, and good luck in the contest. Rollo Seren Roberts January 16, 2013 at 11:15 AM thanks Rollo not sure if I have entered it yet.

Joseph May January 15, 2013 at 9:15 PM nicely penned Seren.... good luck in the contest Seren Roberts January 16, 2013 at 11:15 AM Thanks Joseph ... Seren

Russell Sivey January 15, 2013 at 8:36 PM This is a spectacular and wondrous write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening and pleasantly expressive poem this evening! You have delighted me with this masterful piece, I love this write! Great Work!! Seren Roberts January 15, 2013 at 8:55 PM Thank you Russell