Winter Birds - Lei

A blue jay cries high in the tree
on a branch, vibrant blues we see

A cardinal pair perched for seed
as the bright red male takes the lead 

A chickadee lands as he sings
a dee, dee, dee and flaps his wings

A grey nuthatch lands upside down
and feeds never turning around

12/28/19

Contest: Lay it on me - 8x8 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Cohen Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 9:44 PM
Hello, just noticed this and did a double take as this is a perfect description of my feeder area today. Your bird and nature poems are real, and really well written. I've been enjoying them. In April every year a hummingbird will come to my yard and, looking confused, look for the nectar feeder until I put it up. That's my cue. Best to you.
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February 23, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Thank you Eric, I have a passion for bird watching and enjoy seeing them at my feeders. Thanks for your visit!
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 10:40 PM
Beautiful verse,Tania , congratulations your win. Eve
Kitchin Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 4:38 AM
Thank you Eve!
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January 16, 2020 at 8:25 AM
I love birds..to eat (chicken, turkey, duck) (lol) All kidding aside I do love birds...I have a thing for cardinals :) Beautifully written and very well done, Tania. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
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January 16, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Thank you Charlie for your nice comments and my placement in your contest!
Barden Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 2:36 AM
Very nicely done, my friend - I am a bird person, so this went straight to the heart. Blessings! :o)
Kitchin Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 5:40 PM
Thank you Greg for your comments and visit! :)
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December 28, 2019 at 12:14 PM
This is delightful Tania and to watch birds going about their daily business is such a treat. Good luck in the contest with this sweet Lay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kitchin Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 12:38 PM
Thank you Ann, I love to watch birds as you can see! :) Thanks for your visit!
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December 28, 2019 at 9:34 AM
A darling poem, thoroughly enjoyed; best for a win! xomo
Kitchin Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Thank you Mo! hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 7:55 AM
I am not familiar with this form but I like your result. Good luck in the contest. Happy New year Rick.
Kitchin Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Thank you Rick! :)
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 7:23 AM
absolutely charming Tania:-) good luck in the contest, I must have a peek and see if I can write this form of poems I don't think its one I've done before:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Jan, I wrote about one of my loves! hugs
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