Francine Roberts Poet Senryu

Winter Begone Now

chilled by winter

    the cold air seeps through my bones

        ...I await the spring


winter depresses

   the cold suits my very mood

        ...I long for the spring


winter begone now

   I have had enough of you

      ....I crave springs warmth

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Robert Pettit February 22, 2011 at 6:50 PM That is exactly how I feel right now. Nice trio of very descriptive senryu.

Kash Poet February 21, 2011 at 5:40 PM Wonderful Senryu longing for the Spring.Enjoyed.Thanks a lot for your inspiring words at my pages Francine.---kashinath

Ralph Taylor February 21, 2011 at 5:40 PM Outstanding senryu, Francine. Enjoyed. Anxious to put my shovels away and get out my lawn mower! Did you have a lot of snow in Canada this year? We had more than usual in NY. Have a great week. Thanks for your gracious comments. luv Ralph

Robert A. Dufresne February 21, 2011 at 5:36 PM It's on its way for you , Francine... cause the new leaves are all coming out here in Florida, it's getting real warm and the robins are starting to leave. All good signs for y'all. I too remember that craving. Got so bad i moved!

Sara Kendrick February 21, 2011 at 4:37 PM Good one..The Redbuds are blooming and the Daffodills are blooming as is the Forsythia so it is on its way..Just a short while more..Sara