Winter Beach

Winter beach
09/08/2018


Cool breeze, Leafless trees, Arctic freeze

White cap waves, crumple and cave

Solemn solitary Seagull, pestering peckish people

Sandy seaweed soaked, covers beach cloaked

Frozen fisherman, fearlessly on rock stand

Baby carriages creaking, silent sleep waking

Boxer dog proud, breaks silence loud

Terrifying tike terrorises on her bike

Vast vista view, living large a few

Clear sky cloud free, wind swept jet stream

Smelling salts from sea, rejuvenation for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Roper Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Fantastic imagery, Jeff , congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
Kantor Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 2:04 AM
Thank you so much Eve, really thrilled you enjoyed it :)
Gentry Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 10:16 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
Kantor Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 2:04 AM
Tx Susan :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 8:42 AM
A lovely poem, Jeff. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Kantor Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Hey Line, tx buddy. Always nice to get your comments mate :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace