Winter Atop a Mountain

The snow is powder
Ski to the village below
Hot Toddy : Awaits

Inspired by Abe Lopez’ Haiku Seasons Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Breidenthal Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 11:09 PM
Very fun sounding! Love this haiku! Always, Laura
Goff Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 8:18 PM
fun haiku!HG!! good luck in the contest! Jim
Rider Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 12:00 PM
Oh how Yummy! Good luck in the contest! ~Trudy~
Strand Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 12:39 AM
Nice work HG Rgds Brian
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 5:20 AM
You capture both the cold and the warmth of this skiing experience... well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Devonshire Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 2:07 PM
Great Image of the snowy mountain above the village. Please, HG, what is a "Hot Toddy"? I've heard this phrase so many times. Is it coffee? (Don't drink coffee, so maybe that explains my ignorance.) Love, Carolyn
Townsend Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 12:14 AM
Awesome write... love the cozy ending. Great luck to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
Moreno Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 10:27 AM
The Ski slopes are bright and lovely, great job HG...Raul
Atanacio Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 8:03 AM
wonderful
Gorelick Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 7:35 AM
But I cant ski..can I meet you at the lodge for that Hot Toddy? HG, this is terrific..its so good to have you back. Barbeeg. BG
Goff Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 7:08 AM
mmmmm!!!!!!!love exciting haiku's!!! HG.....love the energy!
Ginn Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 6:05 AM
Do you ski HG. It's one of the only things that Im scared to do but if a hot toddy was waiting at the bottom... You're so funny. Have a happy Saturday my friend
Chircop Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 5:03 AM
well done,lovely haiku-now you re teasing me my friend ,first with the mountains and now with the snow,we do have other things in my country though,lots of sunshine,aquamarine seas,rich history and warm hearted people-but ow how i miss the snow in december and snowman too;-) wonderful write---charma
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace