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Winter Atop a Mountain

The snow is powder Ski to the village below Hot Toddy : Awaits Inspired by Abe Lopez’ Haiku Seasons Contest

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/15/2012 11:09:00 PM

Very fun sounding! Love this haiku! Always, Laura

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/8/2009 8:18:00 PM

fun haiku!HG!! good luck in the contest! Jim

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 5/7/2009 12:00:00 PM

Oh how Yummy! Good luck in the contest! ~Trudy~

Brian Strand

Date: 5/7/2009 12:39:00 AM

Nice work HG Rgds Brian

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/4/2009 5:20:00 AM

You capture both the cold and the warmth of this skiing experience... well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/26/2009 2:07:00 PM

Great Image of the snowy mountain above the village. Please, HG, what is a "Hot Toddy"? I've heard this phrase so many times. Is it coffee? (Don't drink coffee, so maybe that explains my ignorance.) Love, Carolyn

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/26/2009 12:14:00 AM

Awesome write... love the cozy ending. Great luck to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/25/2009 10:27:00 AM

The Ski slopes are bright and lovely, great job HG...Raul

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 4/25/2009 8:03:00 AM

wonderful

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/25/2009 7:35:00 AM

But I cant ski..can I meet you at the lodge for that Hot Toddy? HG, this is terrific..its so good to have you back. Barbeeg. BG

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/25/2009 7:08:00 AM

mmmmm!!!!!!!love exciting haiku's!!! HG.....love the energy!

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/25/2009 6:05:00 AM

Do you ski HG. It's one of the only things that Im scared to do but if a hot toddy was waiting at the bottom... You're so funny. Have a happy Saturday my friend

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/25/2009 5:03:00 AM

well done,lovely haiku-now you re teasing me my friend ,first with the mountains and now with the snow,we do have other things in my country though,lots of sunshine,aquamarine seas,rich history and warm hearted people-but ow how i miss the snow in december and snowman too;-) wonderful write---charma