Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

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Winter Alchemy

Graced by festive home-made trimmings
On an eve which hails life aglow--
Merry  tears  drift in wonderment
As spark of hope blazes, to flow :
That each dwelling exalts  JOY  JOY
Bright the praise through heaven above ,
For the magical glee this year—
A wintertime brimming with white of frost
Of beningn dusks. a swerve imperial
Kindling what nourishes all… LOVE!


12/4/2016
Shadow Hamilton's A Winter Poem

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John Fleming December 20, 2016 at 8:28 PM Very reassuring, Nette, in a seasonal sort of fashion - Really quite charming! All the very best...And have a wonderful Christmas! :) john

Vera Duggan December 7, 2016 at 10:22 PM Hi Nette, how lovely it would be just to spend one christmas with snow falling, it must be perfect, this is a lovely winter christmas poem, I am afraid I have to suffer the heat, I agree with Arthur it would make a lovely Christmas Carol. Take care........Vera

Arthur Vaso December 6, 2016 at 7:01 PM When I read this I felt it could be made into a Christmas carol! So beautiful!

Doug Vinson December 5, 2016 at 4:20 AM Wow. WoW. WOW. We stand in the presence of greatness here. "tangy the vapor of her skin" ..... I am lightheaded. This poem is inclusive of so much beauty, needless to say, that I am seeing 7s, I am seeing Favorite, I am seeing that we see a vast amount of great poems, a lot of great poems, and then there are ones like this. There are spirits in poetry, the soul of it, elements, aspects, and this is simply a purity of it.

Darren White December 4, 2016 at 11:05 PM " ... embroidery of gold tassels kissing buds ... " I love the imagery you use. Congratulations :)

Frederic Parker December 4, 2016 at 10:15 PM Like Merlin your poetry is magical

Len Gasun December 4, 2016 at 8:53 PM Christmas is fast approaching! Congratulations on this magnificent poem and fine Win my dear friend, Nette! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Lory

Eve Roper December 4, 2016 at 7:18 PM Nette, congratulations on your wonderful win :) We wish you a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year

Agnes Krampe December 4, 2016 at 6:06 PM Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Nette. Agnes

Jan Allison December 4, 2016 at 5:42 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Afolabi Muideen December 4, 2016 at 3:42 PM Wow! Great penned poem. Love the read.........A.M.

Judy Ball December 4, 2016 at 1:32 PM WoW! Beautifully expressed. You draw quite lovely picture here my friend. Love the pic. God Bless and a seven from me. JB

Daniel Turner December 4, 2016 at 12:39 PM Just lovely, nette. I love the title. It's a wonderful prelude to your musical poem. Good luck:)

Wendy Rycroft December 4, 2016 at 12:06 PM A beautiful poetic poem x loved it x

Anne-Lise Andresen December 4, 2016 at 11:53 AM - Oh, Nette .... thanks .... B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison December 4, 2016 at 10:23 AM wow what amazing imagery Nette you wove the words in so beautifully - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx