Winter Alchemy

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Graced by festive home-made trimmings On an eve which hails life aglow-- Merry tears drift in wonderment As spark of hope blazes, to flow : That each dwelling exalts JOY JOY Bright the praise through heaven above , For the magical glee this year— A wintertime brimming with white of frost Of beningn dusks. a swerve imperial Kindling what nourishes all… LOVE! 12/4/2016 Shadow Hamilton's A Winter Poem

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John Fleming

Date: 12/20/2016 8:28:00 PM

Very reassuring, Nette, in a seasonal sort of fashion - Really quite charming! All the very best...And have a wonderful Christmas! :) john

Vera Duggan

Date: 12/7/2016 10:22:00 PM

Hi Nette, how lovely it would be just to spend one christmas with snow falling, it must be perfect, this is a lovely winter christmas poem, I am afraid I have to suffer the heat, I agree with Arthur it would make a lovely Christmas Carol. Take care........Vera

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/6/2016 7:01:00 PM

When I read this I felt it could be made into a Christmas carol! So beautiful!

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/5/2016 4:20:00 AM

Wow. WoW. WOW. We stand in the presence of greatness here. "tangy the vapor of her skin" ..... I am lightheaded. This poem is inclusive of so much beauty, needless to say, that I am seeing 7s, I am seeing Favorite, I am seeing that we see a vast amount of great poems, a lot of great poems, and then there are ones like this. There are spirits in poetry, the soul of it, elements, aspects, and this is simply a purity of it.