Winter

We saw the barren elm in gray despair
In wet drifting fog, the talons reaching
Nebulous vapor in the slicing air,
Then to disappear, our hearts beseeching
Every emerald leaf to cluster there:
Reappear anew, spring gospels preaching.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Congrats on your gold medal finish with this beauty, Dale.
Lawless Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 8:01 AM
...the talons reaching... a line to touch the shivering heart of winter. congrats on your placement in Brian's contest
Canerdy Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 9:29 PM
LOVELY poem Dale. Congrats on your win. Janice
Haight Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Great imagery in this lovely Acrostic, Dale! Congratulations on your First Place win! Sandra
Krampe Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 5:39 PM
I love what you did with this rhyming acrostic, Dale. Congrats on your win!
Cozart Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Thanks much, Agnes!
Cresswell Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 12:00 PM
A wonderful description of the cold bleakness of winter. I felt the chill.
Cozart Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 12:01 PM
Thanks, Patricia.
George   Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 5:52 PM
What a picture you have painted with this masterful Acrostic poem. Absolutely beautiful. Elaine
Cozart Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 6:01 PM
Thanks, Elaine.
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:25 PM
I was gripped by your wintery imagery am glad that spring followed :-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:47 PM
Thanks, Jan! I got to write in a new form!!
Pandit Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Well written--lovely rhyme--a winner!
Cozart Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay.
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