Winter

Winter came on time From night’s darkness fell white snow Seasons always know

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/1/2017 5:34:00 AM

- .... every year ... great written, John - // Anne-Lise :)

John Herlihy
Date: 2/1/2017 6:09:00 AM

Many thanks, Sunshine Smile. JH

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/1/2017 5:23:00 AM

Compels to stop, read again, think and feel ... beautiful ...

John Herlihy
Date: 2/1/2017 6:10:00 AM

Many thanks for your kind comment. JH

White Wolf

Date: 2/1/2017 2:58:00 AM

I admire people who can do the Haiku form so well with so few syllables so much is told. Great job!

John Herlihy
Date: 2/1/2017 3:41:00 AM

I bow my head with humility instead the eyes still wide JH

Darren White

Date: 2/1/2017 2:49:00 AM

Did winter know indeed? Here it's a bit messy to be honest. I DO love the haiku. It's spot on.

John Herlihy
Date: 2/1/2017 3:42:00 AM

Thanks, Darren.