Winter

So many birds have filled the air 
They are like clouds 
Clouds 
That quickly move in and out 
Between the sun 

Clouds 
That quickly change direction 
Even though the wind blows north 
A cloud with wings 
Flies south
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 1, 2016 at 11:36 AM
CJ Krieger, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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December 31, 2015 at 5:46 PM
such vivid description and yes they are like clouds - very clever imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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