Winter

Silver haze of misty clouds
swirling from  chattering mouths 
Pursuing dancing snowflakes
Just before they die!

November 11, 2015

winterdodoitsu

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Sara Kendrick

November 19, 2015 at 5:49 PM

Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Rahy Hy

November 24, 2015 at 1:25 PM

Thank you Sara. I feel truly blessed being showered by love and word of encouragement. Love, Rahy

Skat A

November 14, 2015 at 7:54 AM

Rahy, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

Rahy Hy

November 15, 2015 at 9:49 PM

Thank you Skat. I didn't know that I had won till I started receiving notifications emails from the Poetrysoup. I was puzzled to see people were congratulating me. Any how, all I could say was that the monitor got blurry for couple of minutes. Thanks for all your encouragement! It means a lot to me. xoxo