Winter

Winter comes
In its birthday suit

It waits looking
Snug like North Pole grizzly bear
Lay waiting its prey
Then pounce and fade.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meade Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Old man winter -- doing the Muhammad Ali "float like a butterfly and sting like a bee" or better -- the pounce and fade! Loved your poem and style!
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 2:12 PM
wonderful imagery and personification I enjoyed this little poem:-) Hugs jan xx
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