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Winter

one by one
the days turn into blurs
my head feels like hamburger scrambled
my whole body aches right down to my jelly legs
and tingling toes
and i know that winter has come
feeling numb
at a standstill
like a statue
frozen in time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/3/2011 10:35:00 AM
the title WINTER rafted me towards this poem,very well written and this winter is my fav....,thankx for appreciating my work Karen,love Amit.....keep writing
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Date: 11/2/2011 8:24:00 PM
Yes, I think I feel like this at time in winter. But never in wonderful summer!!
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Date: 11/1/2011 11:37:00 PM
makes me chilly just reading this! very well written ..love,Deb
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