Winter

winds and rain call again-
                                  and retrospects an old flood plain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hickman Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 11:27 PM
it seems we want rain untill it comes and especially when we need it a wonderful and truthful piece of such few words that speaks volumes,,,Thank you for holding the contests that you do and for reading and leaving your words upon mine,,,Blessings..cecil
Shango Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 7:30 AM
The conjuring word "retrospects" reminds not just of the weather ... but the human reaction.
George   Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 12:03 AM
Hi Brian! That is what is like here in Southern Ontario today and has been for the past few days. I also wrote a poem about the weather yesterday as I sat in my kitchen watching it play before my eyes like a movie. With your few words, you have painted a very solid image. Lainie
Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 3:24 AM
About the way it is here. Keep the pen flowing with wisdom. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 10:59 AM
nice segway ..second line. Light & Love
Townsend Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 8:10 AM
You nailed the weather of the last two days in Kansas. Now it is just down right cold... burrrrr. Great writing, Brian. Thank you for your comments on my poetry today. Smiles from Lolita~ Happy Holidays
Lopez Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 7:45 AM
weather can be a very tricky thing .... and sometimes it can be down right dangerous!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 7:44 AM
And we are experiencing just this kind of weather today in N.J. .. after a night of teaming rain... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry posts yesterday.. hope u enjoyed the collaboration with Jared Pickett and myself on Friends...Better Lovers? Parts 1,2,and 3.. it was quite a feat but we pulled it off... enjoy your blogs Brian very much... blessings.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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