Winter

winds and rain call again- and retrospects an old flood plain

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 12/12/2009 11:27:00 PM

it seems we want rain untill it comes and especially when we need it a wonderful and truthful piece of such few words that speaks volumes,,,Thank you for holding the contests that you do and for reading and leaving your words upon mine,,,Blessings..cecil

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/11/2009 7:30:00 AM

The conjuring word "retrospects" reminds not just of the weather ... but the human reaction.

Elaine George

Date: 12/11/2009 12:03:00 AM

Hi Brian! That is what is like here in Southern Ontario today and has been for the past few days. I also wrote a poem about the weather yesterday as I sat in my kitchen watching it play before my eyes like a movie. With your few words, you have painted a very solid image. Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2009 3:24:00 AM

About the way it is here. Keep the pen flowing with wisdom. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/9/2009 10:59:00 AM

nice segway ..second line. Light & Love

Lena Townsend

Date: 12/9/2009 8:10:00 AM

You nailed the weather of the last two days in Kansas. Now it is just down right cold... burrrrr. Great writing, Brian. Thank you for your comments on my poetry today. Smiles from Lolita~ Happy Holidays

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/9/2009 7:45:00 AM

weather can be a very tricky thing .... and sometimes it can be down right dangerous!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/9/2009 7:44:00 AM

And we are experiencing just this kind of weather today in N.J. .. after a night of teaming rain... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry posts yesterday.. hope u enjoyed the collaboration with Jared Pickett and myself on Friends...Better Lovers? Parts 1,2,and 3.. it was quite a feat but we pulled it off... enjoy your blogs Brian very much... blessings.. luv.. "Sweetheart"